|Reviews for Dont' envy me! Please!|
| BewaretheIdes chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
I thought the same thing as the reviewer above me...bit confusing as all of the people writting under this catogory are writting about something different.
Your is still good though...keep it up
| Rambling Thestral chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
Sorry, but I just had a question. Do you know what category book this is under? It says "Heart is a Lonely" - but is that supposed to be "The Heart is a Lonely Hunter"? Either way, it doesn't seem to match, but the title struck me as a book I'd read (the latter). Well, anyway.
Reading your story (even though I have no idea what it's about), it's good writing. And well done descriptions. I like how it begins with the narrator talking to the reader, and the conclusion, the declaration of 'moving on' is good too.
Keep writing! (It's so sad when people stop.)