Reviews for The Love on One's Heart
YaleAceBella12 chapter 6 . 3/30/2012
Please write more...

Bella/YaleAce
GilmoreGirlsAddict - Rogan Fan chapter 6 . 8/10/2011
awsome story

please update now
BeautifulBlackRose chapter 6 . 12/18/2006
I really like it. Please update soon!
xxblankcanvas chapter 6 . 7/24/2006
Good chapter, and good story so far. I have to say though that you should work on the pov a little more. In one sentence it goes from first, to second and back and stuff. Update asap please! )
coffeeaddict1515 chapter 6 . 6/8/2006
I like it update, I know that you have not update in the pasted you but please update I want it know what happens nexted.
stefi690 chapter 6 . 5/4/2006
update soon please!
kilara chapter 6 . 4/22/2006
I like your story. It had body substance. Its like reading a good book. ITs not like some of the stories that have no emotion or anything to them. YOu just need to work on you tense. you go to first to second a lot. Keep up the good work
I've Got A Secret chapter 6 . 4/12/2006
That was different. Very
finnlover chapter 6 . 12/10/2005
definitely original :) but I personally prefer stories that is not written in first person point of view.
finnlover chapter 4 . 12/10/2005
:)
finnlover chapter 3 . 12/10/2005
Its good. Dunno about a tan rory tho, hahah I like her pale and creamy LOL !
Kylie1403 chapter 6 . 12/7/2005
he should be 100% honest

you ave a great story here although maybe you should get a beta

Your spelling is alright but you seem to mix up words and you jump from person to person and charcter to charcter without warning

i know everyone makes mistakes (my spelling SUCKS) but yeah
rnl1993 chapter 6 . 11/24/2005
continue please
psycholucy chapter 5 . 11/22/2005
what goes on between logan and his father.
rnl1993 chapter 5 . 11/22/2005
continue soon.
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