Reviews for Pray For The Valar
Ne'ith5 chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
So...what happened next? Did he survive? don't be cruel let me know.
Sashenka Greenleaf chapter 1 . 12/22/2005
O this will be continued I hope!
Midnightdreamr chapter 1 . 10/21/2005
NOT THE END! UPdate, you left the story on a cliffe, how could you? Update soon!

LOCISVU chapter 1 . 10/17/2005
Why(or from what)exactly is Legolas dying?
DRUNKEN LANDLORD chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
Please update *hangs on edge of chair* PLEASE!
luthien seregon chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
i don't understand... why is legolas dying?
Anonymous chapter 1 . 10/14/2005
You need a beta that will actually do her job. A real beta will not only fix typos, but will rephrase sentences and make the story sound better. Too many things make no sense because you aren't fluent in English. For instance: 'do not dare die to me now' should say: 'do not dare die ON me now'. Get an American beta that's at least 18 years old and will actually help your stories make real sense.
Sadie chapter 1 . 10/14/2005
Oh. This is so sad... What can I say? You are going to continue it, aren't you? And you ARE NOT going to kill Legolas, ARE YOU? *puppy dog eyes*

Great story. Poor Legolas, Poor SUPER Elrond comes for help in time.