Reviews for Apprentice of Evil v2
intstebri chapter 9 . 4/12/2007
ho! no!

it's so sad! (this is completely them, beside!)

But so sad...

And it's like that since so many time...

Beautiful.. and sad!

But still beautiful (I expect an happy ending, may I?)

okay.. back to Meet the Music to avoid bad dreams! (lol!)
jfg207 chapter 9 . 3/2/2007
Did Max end up killing Ben or what? Did Tinga get to her family before Lydecker? And did Max go back to Logan and confront about the baby?

So many unanswered questions...

meritaten chapter 9 . 6/14/2006
I read this story before, but couldn't remember the title to find it again. I finally found it, and enjoyed reading it again,. but I was disappointed to find that you hadn't updated it. I'd love to read more. I hope you finish it.
Mari83 chapter 9 . 12/11/2005
Funny, enlightening and surely unusual way to get to know Portland as well as an interesting version how things could have gone after the pulse.

„We were mainlining caffeine, sugar, Ephedra, Provigil” Maybe I should try this mixture, too.

“Thought we could fix the world. Amazing how much energy that can give you; what you are willing to endure for that” Now, why does that remind me of Logan?

„still the world’s largest independent bookstore” Does “still” mean it does exist right now? That would be a really good reason to visit Portland.

White and father in one sentence gives me certain associations, but on the other hand, as an old woman she can’t be the daughter of S2 White and his father’s name was Sandemann, if I remember right?

Poor Ben. This crazy couple surely was nice but it still is sad if that was the most friendly thing which has ever happened to him

Liked Max’s bitter comment about the veterinary reference and Tinga comforting her.

Only one complaint: No Logan in this chapter;-)
Babyangel86 chapter 9 . 12/10/2005
cool stuff... the convo in the cafe was really random... but i gues that was the point...

aww... sort out max and logan... no fair... all this heart ahe is unecessary...

update soon...:-)
Maria656 chapter 9 . 12/10/2005
Hope you were going for another name gag with the White references [else you're going to be mad at me] Very funny. [and O'Reilly is kinda close to Reilynn...]

Looking forward to more.
BlueAngel137 chapter 8 . 12/10/2005
Thank you so much for not letting us suffer until you update again. I'm so glad, Logan is o.k.

I've been on a vacation, that's why my review comes a bit late. Sorry.

I'm really wondering what you have up your sleeve. I mean, there were four X5's in the train, right?

-... Four X5s disembarked in Portland. ...

We know about Tinga, Max and Ben, so who is the 4th? Zack?

I'm dying to know what happens next. Great job, especially the amount of suspense you build up - hey, that's awesome. "Hit A Sister Back" is one of my favourite episodes, so I'm curious how you spin your story around it.

Mari83 chapter 8 . 12/1/2005
How you can see, I listened to you and signed in.

Interesting to see what consequences a depressed Logan has for Seattle. And I agree with our pessimistic view: “or close enough they didn’t have to bother with it”

Like how you bring Tinga into the story. Hope she and her family will get a happier ending than in the series

So glad Ben knows some medical stuff and drew the wrong conclusions out of it!

Maybe his original plans with Logan give Max some doubts about her and Ben being alike? Do you know any websites, where abbreviations are explained? Like SOB?

You should go and show sim how to do that almost-cliffhanger of yours..
Bob chapter 8 . 12/1/2005
Phew! I really did think you were going to make me wait another chapter to know if Logan was alive or not. Is Eyes Only going to be involved with Tinga's rescue mission?
Maria656 chapter 8 . 11/30/2005
Admit it, you thought the chapter was going to end here.


Update soon!
0101010 chapter 7 . 11/18/2005
nice cliff
BlueAngel137 chapter 7 . 11/18/2005

I really don't know, how I could miss this story, but I did and I'm so glad I found it know.

Chapters 1-6 are excellent and the tension is KILLING ME! Argghh.

I know, the title doesn't promise a 'happy-ending-fairy-tale', but I really hope Ben didn't kill Logan.

It's great how you characterize Ben, the mixture between caring brother and cold blooded killer is perfectly written and I especially like this part:

-...Human sheep; they looked like they were moving, but in reality they were going nowhere and accomplishing nothing. Just milling about in their pathetic little lives, completely oblivious to the predators among them or danger they were in. ...

And hey, what is it between you and sim-r, a cliffhangar competition? ;-)

Please, please, please update ASAP!

Mari chapter 7 . 11/17/2005
Mean! I need to know what happened to Logan!

Nevertheless, liked Max’s depressed thoughts about leaving Logan

And what do you mean with it’s too soon for Ben to brush Max’s hair out of her face? Another Zack-like sibling-love?

And a cliff-hanger ending again. Evil indeed!
Bob chapter 7 . 11/17/2005
What did Ben do to Logan? What dangerous predator? I need answers!
Maria656 chapter 7 . 11/16/2005
Sim's done it to you again! Now the chap is SHORT on top of cliffy.

Update SOON!
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