|Reviews for Waiting to Die|
| aalens chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
It was always odds on that Snape would be a good guy - because Jo took such care to make his looks ugly and his character easy to hate, so we were supposed to think, as Harry did, that he was a villian.
As usual with your fics, I loved this little gem.
| FreeAllFrogs chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
If you check out the "Behavior Patterns and Personality
Characteristics Associated with Espionage" you'll find what a good job Rowling did with writting Snape. Try thinking of the Harry Potter books as a 'Who done it' with out the 'explain it all' at the end. She did not intend to tell the reader who did what to who and why they did it.
| librarywitch chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
Me too! I think that Severus Snape was a toggle character like Dumbles. It doesn't take a lot to nudge him to either side. I do however think that Dumbledore had a lot of responsibility for where Severus ended up, just like he had for where Harry ended up. Another well done ficlet, and a deep one too!
| DecepticonDefenestrater chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
I could never see Snape doing that. I was dead set on bad guy Snape after HBP.
| Immortal Sailor Cosmos chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
I think you should take out both the endings and just leave it open. Let the reader think whatever they want. it seems ... better and a fic that way. both endings seem, incomplete as they are, but if you cut them both out it has a better feel to it.
Immortal Sailor Cosmos
| ShadowedHand chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
Not kill him, surely. But be so harsh? I'm not sure about that either.
| where-is-my-tennant chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
i like the 2nd ending better, and he IS GOOD! yay!
| rankokun alpha chapter 1 . 1/30/2007
ohh i love the second ending keep up the awesome writing!
| Aldavinur chapter 1 . 10/21/2006
Interesting story with a sad touch!
When reading this you can't other than pity Snape!
I think it would have been better if you could have decided for one ending, but they are both fitting, I think!
| abraxis chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
I'm definitely going with Alt Ending #2 here.
(1) I do believe that Severus did what he did on a dying Dumbledore's orders.
(2) I don't see Harry as ever being the kind to AK anyone other that LV and especially not someone who had dropped their wand
(3) I think that Harry is just Slytherin enough to make Severus suffer through being a public hero. I mean, that is really 'evil'. Mahaha.
| Mariposa chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
Loved this drabble! I vote for ending 2. It shows Harry's Slytherinness, is that a word? The first ending was cool too but I'd like to see the second more.
| Dags-Calhoun chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
Come on torture the bastered!
| SofiaDragon chapter 1 . 2/13/2006
I like the third one best, torture by celebrety.
| dogbertcarroll chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
I like 2. Hero and Arsehole!
| Simxp chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
Great beginning, but the ending could be seriously improved. Not in terms of plot, but grammar - after a well-written story, to leave us with "Avada Kedavra and Snape smiled" is just annoying. The two alternate endings, while intriguing, bring you out of the story and destroy the continuity. I suggest picking your favourite one, developing it a bit more, and using that as the only ending. Otherwise, excellent.