Reviews for Hunk of Metal
Cruelest Sea chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
Excellent.
sallyferrell chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
Great one! Very heavy, but it needs to be for that situation they were in. Thanks.
Rebelcat chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
Ah, very nice! I could visualize that all perfectly, and you packed an awful lot into just a few words.

I liked this!
e-pony chapter 1 . 10/17/2005
SJ, you do an excellent job of capturing the power of personal symbolism and the weighty significance of a pivotal moment in two lives. Good writing!

Pony
Starsky's Strut chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
Nice. Very nice.

I could picture the whole scene... smell the surf... feel the waves lapping at my feet... hear the sound of two small pieces of metal hitting the water... only to raise a silent, small cloud of sand once they hit the bottom...I could also sense the frustration that caused them to act that way...

Nothing had changed... but everything did.

Very Nice!

-Strut
Kreek chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
Beautiful Drabble. Especially loved the last line.

Kreek.
Creedo chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
I liked this and I picture it post Sweet Revenge. Very touching.
A-blackwinged-bird chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
Wow, those are some powerful words there!

Great job,

Emily