Reviews for Hunk of Metal
Cruelest Sea chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
sallyferrell chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
Great one! Very heavy, but it needs to be for that situation they were in. Thanks.
Rebelcat chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
Ah, very nice! I could visualize that all perfectly, and you packed an awful lot into just a few words.

I liked this!
e-pony chapter 1 . 10/17/2005
SJ, you do an excellent job of capturing the power of personal symbolism and the weighty significance of a pivotal moment in two lives. Good writing!

Starsky's Strut chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
Nice. Very nice.

I could picture the whole scene... smell the surf... feel the waves lapping at my feet... hear the sound of two small pieces of metal hitting the water... only to raise a silent, small cloud of sand once they hit the bottom...I could also sense the frustration that caused them to act that way...

Nothing had changed... but everything did.

Very Nice!

Kreek chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
Beautiful Drabble. Especially loved the last line.

Creedo chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
I liked this and I picture it post Sweet Revenge. Very touching.
A-blackwinged-bird chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
Wow, those are some powerful words there!

Great job,