Reviews for Delayed Death
HeartKnowsMore26 chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
I love your story!
lulu halulu chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
I'm sad Sasuke died but it was a nice story anyway.
kitsunecoyote chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
I like it alot! Are you going to continue? Please do so!
Essyllus chapter 1 . 3/9/2006

He died.

[reads again]

Props on your excellent endings, though the semicolon fragment ["his life ended"] was sort of unnecessary. I found the sequence of events somewhat confusing, yet that may be because I read too fast.

Some cliches to avoid:

Sasuke's "obsidian eyes"
PrincessAmy-and-Blueberry chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
I loved it so much. but the ending was so ...sniff.
Sakura-Girl 2005 chapter 1 . 10/25/2005
This was so sad. I like how you ended it, even though Sasuke died.
Zhblj chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
a nice story... but sad one...
freakenout chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
omg noo sasuke died, bro sakura could have healed some of the wounds he had. xDD.
Hersheys Rocks chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
really really sad *sniff sniff* but it was really good
Dark Angelic Kitty chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
aww soo sad...but good! keep it up!