|Reviews for Lightning|
| Sarah. AKA Zellie Kinneas chapter 20 . 5/1/2006
Oh mann! I can't wait to read this whole thing when it's done _ I admit, when I found this fic, I wasn't searching for anything big... just kinda like a oneshot thing. But I started reading and I got hooked. This fic just kinda rawks like that XP Plus, Irvine/Zell fics are so RARE! So rare, it's inspired me to start one of my own... Hell if that's ever finished XP
And as much as I could relate to Zell before, the added details of this fic, such as Zell loving white chocolate, cause me to relate to Zell *even more* ! _
| Emrold chapter 20 . 5/1/2006
Super-yayies for boy love! _ Hip-hip, hooray! Hip-hip, hooray!
...Hmm, I just realised 'hip-hip hooray' is kinda like a perverted exclamation... Hip-to-hip and hooray for the things that follow! xD
Well, anyway, I'm a fan of Kitty's fics - I think they're fantastically written for stories of the BL genre! Kitty made me a follower of the Zell/Irvine pairing x.x There aren't many BL fics that are as well-written as hers!
Okay, so, after all that off-topic rambling you can see that I *heart* this fic! The collaboration brought an entire new angle to the fic; it's very interesting to know that you plan these chapters yourselves without really revealing its contents to the other writer... this way, everyone can feel the suspense, right?
I liked the song. Well, it started out weird, but the last two verses were great but a bit hard to imagine (I kept laughing at the image of Zell wearing a helmet on stage - images of Judge Dredd kept coming up xD). All in all, I also liked Seifer 'big baby' personality, and one recent phrase that I laughed at a lot was, "Seifer grumbled, pulling his coat around him tight and mentally growling at naked-Rinoa-image which wasn’t staying as a naked-Rinoa-image." I thought the italic text was well-placed xD
I haven't got much else to say, except to ask: have you decided an ending for the fic? Or is it going to go on and on until one of you decides to end it? I'm sure for two marvellously experienced writers like you gals, the latter would not be the case. Or is it?
Keep writing! I'm rooting for you!
| Parental Take over chapter 20 . 4/30/2006
okay! WTF? I just read this and at a diff...page and...HOLY FUCK THERE'RE TWO OF THESE! well hell that makes a lot of sense *smacks self in head* got it! hyne, I'm sad i didn't even...sry...I'll go away now...
(still love this chapter tho)
| Parental Take over chapter 19 . 4/23/2006
ABOUT FUCKING TIME! (holds face in hands and cries)
Irvine: Why the hell are you crying?
Cause it's so awesome, i heart the angst, the angst made it taste nummys! And ma dincht rox all the other mom's out of their sox! and and and and and and... (cries more) I can't decide if i'm uber happy or uber sad or...
(throws frying pan) wah this was a good good good chapter...i love you! (runs off to wriggle in the fan gurling goodness)
Irvine: YOU HIT ME WITH A FRYING PAN DAMMIT!
| TurkFox chapter 18 . 4/16/2006
I love this story so much! Please make "Rubedo"/Zell show himself to Irvine soon!
| Ultimate Sorceress chapter 17 . 4/8/2006
yummy! update soon! I still think zell and seifer should get together...unless theres hope for seifer and squall lol...oh threesome! ir/se/ze! yay! heheeh update soon!
| LilithIllyria chapter 17 . 4/8/2006
OMHOMHOMH.. THRE WAY! *falls over and dies* ok.. nvm.. lol. Keep it up write another chapy. PLease lol.
| Parental Take over chapter 16 . 4/1/2006
(pets Irvine) aw, he gots a cardy from his crush...yey! The more and more Irvy likes ruby the more and more nervous i get thinking about how he's going to act when he finds out! WAH!
| 3Mon-.-Mon3 chapter 15 . 3/26/2006
I can't believe that you only have 17 reviews for this fantastic story. I've been reading for awhile now, and this story never ceases to brighten my day when I get into my Information Processing class and I am bored to tears. I look forward to absolutely every update, and this story has (thus far) managed to keep my full and utter attention. Congrats.
Colder Than Ice
| Raiegki Leviathan chapter 14 . 3/17/2006
Hmm. Been reading without reviewing for a while. Yeah, I know, I'm bad. I've been doing that a lot, lately.
Smart Zell teh smex
Pathetic Seifer teh phunny
Oh, and it's March 17th, ZELL'S BIRTHDAY. How befitting to have this chapter on this day.
| LilithIllyria chapter 13 . 3/9/2006
*cries* POR ZELLY! *hugs Zell plushy* I think Seify and Zelly should he together they act like an old couple anyways. *squeezs*
| Parental Take over chapter 13 . 3/9/2006
(really loud squeak)
I'm falling apart here, the cuteness! THE CUTENESS! (glomps Irvy) I agree with Rube...Zelly-za! I'll kill that one dude if he dares touch irvy again!1 (huggles)
Irvine: GET THE FUCK OFF ME!
| LilithIllyria chapter 12 . 3/3/2006
AHH cuteness! I lurf it so! Poor Seify.. *cuddles plushy* I can't twiat for the next chapy! *give cookies* Whooto keep it up!
| Parental Take over chapter 12 . 3/3/2006
(straight up spazez) WAH (glomps Irvy, Zelly-za, and Seify) I LOVE THEM SO MUCH! (cries) this story is makin me all twitchy and happy...I WANT EVERYTHING TO BE GEWD NOW! (twitches) i want to see what Irvy will do when he finds out it Zelly-za!
I heart you...so much...so much!
| LilithIllyria chapter 11 . 2/24/2006
I think the saying is but it made a point. I really liked this chapters as well as the others! *gives cookies* Keep it up! I can't wait for the next chapter!