Reviews for Shattered wings
Akira Stridder chapter 3 . 7/8/2006
good chapter!
Akira Stridder chapter 2 . 7/8/2006
good chapter!
Akira Stridder chapter 1 . 7/8/2006
good chapter!
vedmid chapter 6 . 6/14/2006
nice chapter, i liked the visuals for tsunadae's trip into naruto
isthisparadise chapter 6 . 6/13/2006
This is a great story and your right the naruto characters do have more depth to them. But that as it may be i would still like Arashi to gain his Sanity or at least realize that naruto is his son some time during this fiction even if it is at the end of an extreamly long battle where Arashi or naruto dies.
Failing Mentality chapter 6 . 6/12/2006
Wow. But I thought it was said that Tsunade was the one and only.

Is Chiyo the person that Tsunade is searching for?

Failing Mentality.
vedmid chapter 5 . 3/15/2006
overall this is a good story. Its mood has come across strongly and i'm glad you've avoided many of the common sterotypes. Seeing Naruto as a mercenary has definetly been interesting. Only real criticism is that you had far too much happen at the end of chapter 5 with very little leading up to it.
Hououza chapter 5 . 3/11/2006
Sorry for taking so long to review.

Excellent chapter.

Good luck & best wishes,

deviltwit chapter 5 . 3/10/2006
conlan0414863 chapter 5 . 3/7/2006
keep on typing and ill keep on reading
Gozen V chapter 5 . 3/7/2006
awesome story

i did not expect that plot twist, but none the less this is a crazy story. I just wish that you could describe naruto and his abilities a bit more. You should also make him more powerful, i think

hope you update soon
BasicallyAnIdiot chapter 5 . 3/7/2006
I'm sorry, but that's sick and wrong on so many levels.
Licht Sieger chapter 5 . 3/7/2006
I don't understand why you keep pointing out that Naruto is a "cold-blooded killer", when the ninjas of the Narutoverse kill people for money anyway.
LeweL chapter 5 . 3/7/2006
TIght dude nice story loving it
Lone Wolf Pup chapter 4 . 3/2/2006
can't wait for the next chapter
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