|Reviews for Squeak|
| groovy girl 05 chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
wow, Short and sweet, LOVED it! x-x-x
| Vote14Caskett chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
| Freezyboncoolipants chapter 1 . 10/24/2005
Hee hee! That was funny
| Dreem chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
hehe thats great!
youre a great writer!
im your fan
| writerchic16 chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
Awesome story! The weird part is that I could TOTALLY imagine Chandler and Joey doing that! Of course, like most people I thought it was season 5 and Rachel was going to see...what happened between Monica and Chandler in season 5. But the fact that it wasn't is what made it so much better! Very funny fic!
| MonicaKateBingCastle chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
So funny! LOL
| taylor chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
| auditeur chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
omg i can totally imagine this happening. good job!
| Anwa chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
I know in my last review, I was extremly critical, and I sincerly hope that you didn't take that as being anything but constructive, because you do have talent, you just needed to slow down and give it time to develop.
I was just getting worried that you had taken my reivew the wrong way when I hadn't seen you in awhile! (I know that's incredibly self-centered of me, but work with me here).
Anyways, back on track here. Very cute. The characters worked well, their personalities were more on this time. The title was catchy and to the point (I think I commented on that last time), and the POV was consistant.
I would have liked to see a bit more development in the story, but that'll come in time.
But, on the brighter side of things, this story defitinally shows improvements! Good work.
Hugs and kisses.
| Miss-Bing chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
That was funny :D I liked it a lot .. Well, I liked everything but the fact tah Mon was with Richard, but it doesn't matter much .. The storyline was great !
| tini243 chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
Funny! Loved it. It would be awesome if you made a longer story out of that.
| the writer formerlyknown as lm chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
This story's dedicated to ME? Well, um... first I would like to thank the academy, and my parents for reproducing and having said offspring...um...my friend, Lauren, and Jessica...and you, Liz! And the state of Utah, just for being there!
OK, I loved this! Joey and Chandler are the cutest ever. Is not the mental image of Joey giggling uber cuteness? And Rachel getting angry about it (reminded of Rachel's peeves with the birds in season 4)! Pure genius. A fluffy fic worthy of an aw...
PS- I hope you re-read Chandler's Chance and try to get it. I tried to make it as clear as possible. I'm thinking of maybe doing it like 'Wild Things' and putting in the scenes you didn't see, just to make it clearer. I dunno...
| spacemonkey69 chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
*giggles like mad*
oh honey, that was so cute! What made it even better is that I can really, truly imagine those two just jumping on beds...oh that would be so cute!
Ahem, anyway, this was great, top stuff! Keep it up sweet cakes!
| me chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
aw...thats cute...i like it
| Leondra chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
Oh, that was hilarious! :grins insanely: At first I thought it was, you know...what everyone was supossed to think it was, and even though that would have turned out hilarious (escpecially if Rachel didn't know about MC yet) but the fact that it was Joey and Chandler jumping on the bed...I love it!