Reviews for One Minute
JoyBean chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
Oh what a beautiful, tragic story. You captured the quiet silence that precedes death so beautifully.
Purple Raveness chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
togitnj chapter 1 . 2/2/2006
Oh, wow. This was . . . way too short. And I mean that in the best possible way. The emotion behind this was tremendous, and it makes me want to know the whole story. Perhaps one day you'll treat us to it?
LTwill chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
I loved your story. You have such descriptive writing, I love that. I hope that there could possibly be a next chapter ? :)
Silverthreads chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
Wow. Even on the second read this is incredibly powerful. The completeness of despair is so eloquently drawn.