|Reviews for I Won't Look Far into the Future|
| Grogert331 chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
HOLY F*! That was just...WOW...I don't know where to begin! The feeling and tone of the story was SO strong! It seemed fast-paced for how long it seemed, but it was Perfect! The description of the characters and the setting, and the scenes were AMAZING! The few negatives in this story were; minor(extremely minuscule) spelling & grammar errors, little dialogue(but it seemed to fit this type of story very well), ...and I can't think of anything else. Well done...WOW...I just noticed that you've written 123 stories so far O.O
Keep up the great work; you are an extremely talented writer!
P.S. I don't know why but I felt the urge to post this quote as well
'I am enough of an artist to draw freely upon my imagination. Imagination is more important than knowledge. Knowledge is limited. Imagination encircles the world' Einstein
| SisterSafetyPin chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
This story wasn't fluff but it definitely wasn't angst either. It seemed more like, this is how life really is and that's ok, kind of thing. I really enjoyed it, kudos
| Bowl of Slightly Hateful Rice chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
It was good :D
| Muffin-crumbs chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
Mehh...it was good. As i read the most recent reviews as a preview to me reading it. i had to admit i was expecting more, one person used the word perfect.
Now i don't want you to think im being a jerk and flaming you far from it, and i'm not blaming you for the expectations i created for myself that is all on me...
Actually i have no idea why i am writing this long diatribe as a review, but i guess it come down to me just thinking that the transition from a story into a biography, while interesting didn't interest me all that well. The story was great just that the transition I don't know, how to explain it, but it didn't seem right. well either way i liked the story so thats a plus on you...
again sorry for the rambling nature of this
| rokusan23 chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
i usually hate giving good reviews...
but, man! this was awesome! at first, i thought it was one of those super shallow type...
you dont see a lot of awesomely written NaruIno fics like this one.
Hell... age is something scary huh? all of us will reach the terminal someday... so we should sit back and enjoy the ride...
T_T Naruto... I could be your private nurse... . I do have to graduate first... ehehe...
| someone179 chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
o.o holy sh!t this is a great story :D
| The Soul of A Warrior chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
That was å pretty good story.
I probably didn't see the dat this was put out but I just thought I ask why naruto's father and mother were never mentioned. They could have been of great usage when the elders were bad mouthing him. His father being the 4th hokage and all. But. Other than that. No regrets or flames.
Again. Good story .
| jessa chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
the story is really cool...nice one...I LOVE IT! keep up the good work...XD
| RakeeshJ4 chapter 1 . 6/27/2007
Interesting. The story passes from the micro to the macro, in a way. From the closely personal to the pulled-back biographical.
I enjoyed reading it. It gave me that feeling of contented regret when it was done. Nice work.
| AdrianTepes001 chapter 1 . 6/27/2007
awesome, one of the best Naruto stories I've read.
| Reader chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
OMG!That was justr great, it was awsomei luved it...please keep up th good work, and stuff, it was just...GREAT!thpugh there should have had more Naruino
| jere7782 chapter 1 . 5/20/2007
i enjoyed reading it.
| Amari Kazama chapter 1 . 5/15/2007
| Zoey24 chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
Wow, cool story!
I love how you made Naruto and Ino hook up, and have them live in the present instead of thinking of the future.
| noname00 chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
this was the first fic that i ever read that everybody(almost everybody) actually died from old age and such it actually made me think about my future...wow...your fic was just well it was fantastic in a very unique way,it was just very 'life' like that it actually could make a person think about there future i mean no fic as ever made me think of mines and for that i really did love your fic it was just well written and just great