|Reviews for Take Me Once|
| AntivanCrowe chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
Very sweet and i love how Walter just left Henry alone.
| Duo Yuy-Chang chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
Plz upadte!3 if this isnt a one-shot
| Gaia Faye chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
Hmm, I'm not so sure about this one. I mean, Walter's been trying to kill him, so I don't think he would just walk away like that. And you don't explain this sudden connection between the two. I don't think anything of that nature would just develop out of the blue.
If you were to take the game in another direction, with them developing a connection like that, I would suggest doing so in multiple chapters. But that's just me.
It was well-written and I enjoyed reading it, though!