Reviews for Just Breathe
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
O! Great story! I love it!
saclateri chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
I enjoyed this tag, with just enough information to make me beg for more. Nice interaction between Sheppard and MacKay, and I liked the whole schoolyard comparison. My only complaint - not long enough :-)
Silverthreads chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
Good writing and a fine tag.
fififolle chapter 1 . 10/17/2005
Oh, nice. Great missing scene. Excellent dialogue. Rodney's emotions and sensations were very real and scary. Shep was nice. Good work. *hugs Rodney*
cybersyd42 chapter 1 . 10/17/2005
I have to echo Jen - is that it? I was getting so excited, because there's not nearly enough Lost Boy tags and that you had done one, well... this has so much potential for more! I'd love it if you'd continue to explore McKay's feelings on the enzyme, and maybe some from Sheppard's POV. Great ficlet though.
nebbyJen chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
Is that all? But you are doing so well with this. I know, we just have to wait and see what happens but still... Good addition H! J