|Reviews for Death and a Daisy|
| killing u with umbrellas chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
you know, if she hadn't attended the funeral, she would have lived since the words were “Lastly: Do you swear to me that you shall never stand guilty at my funeral?”
| Jedi Knight Bus chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
Ooh, ooh! Really, really neat. Totally love these kind of stories, love Narcissa, and this was neat and so well written. Awesome job, I loved the backwards storytelling. Either titles would have been great. ;)
| Red Bess Rackham chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
That was VERY interesting. Well written and cool. I like how the "he loves me/loves me not" bits were going sort of "forwards", but like a flashback, and the other parts were sort of "backwards". It was really cool. Having Lucius do an Unbreakable Vow with Narcissa was also really intersting too. Quite original - I've never read anyone do that before. Mind you I don't really read anything to do with the Malfoys in general, but anyways.
The title was perfect, so don't let anyone tell you different, LOL. And, that last line: "The flower lied" was totally wicked. GREAT job!
| Lilly Rose chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
Youe story is very well written. You made the carachters very well. Keep writing more
| coolmarauders chapter 1 . 9/10/2006
This was amazing! I loved how it went backwards; it was so eerie and it gave me chills. Ah-mazing. Narcissa was great - I loved the little parts with the flowers. I can picture it in my head, you wrote it so well.
I'm so glad that I found this Narcissa fic!
P.S. And coolmarauders really is my account; I was too lazy to log in.
| SoloMoon chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
Wow. I love the way that you have this set up, especailly the way that it ends, so that you have to go back and read the beginning, and, the more you read, the clearer it becomes. This is so good, a really really well-written piece.
| Flashyfirebird chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
This story is incredible - so beautifully written and full of emotion! I love how you mix up the events of Narcissa's life - at first it's a bit confusing, but at the end, it all comes together and finally makes sense. The juxtaposition of the "He loves me/he loves me not" is really interesting and captured my interest right away.
Narcissa is guilty of murdering her husband, and she goes to his funeral. Is she going to die? You don't actually show her dying, but we're led to assume that she is... then again, perhaps in her heart she doesn't feel guilty for murdering Lucius because he was so cruel. It was clever of you to word the Unbreakable Vow so ambiguously. Poor Narcissa!
| xXxLunaLovegoodxXx chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
okay... I did like it it was wierd but i really did like it you are so creative.
| Penner54 chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
nicely done. I enjoyed this story all the way through. At one point I found it hard to follow but after reading it a second time figured it out. Amazing. I think you've captured both so well...
| azirainbow chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
O, I liked it. Nice atmosphere. The going back through time with random intervals inbetween reminded me of the film Momento, except I could understand exactly what happened in this story.
The daisy thing enriched the story and added a sort of innocence to Narcissa's character. That mixed well with the murder.
| Morganofthefairies chapter 1 . 10/31/2005
this is GREAT. I really love this story. Poor naive Narcissa.
I love how the unbreakable vow is appearing in stories now, its wonderful and there are so many plot bunnies.
i like the...backwardness of the story. You know the ending but you're still riveted to find out why...really great and i didn't find it confusing.
BTW, the title is fine...it has a nice ring to it.
Adding to favs. :)
| Erin chapter 1 . 10/25/2005
Oh. My. God... I LOVE IT! Awesome job, Kaylee! I'm sorry I didn't read and review earlier... OMG! I love this story! *puts it on favorites list*
| Black is the New Pink chapter 1 . 10/17/2005
Here I am reviewing. I didn't reread it a third time. Sorry. I liked it...not my favorite of yours...but was still good Klent. According to Alyssa and Mervin the highway is blocked by the police...we shall have to investagate. Don't you love how I use these reviews to tell you stuff?
| theKRITIC chapter 1 . 10/17/2005
'The flower lied' would be a good title for this in my opinion.
But, in the books, unbreakable vows are breakable, but if you do you will die.
I also think that if you don't know what is going on, then it doesn't work.
*pause* who's Rabastan?
| Harry Lvr chapter 1 . 10/17/2005
Wow. Just...wow. That was chilling, twisted, and haunted, but it was fantastic. No, I think it should be 'Death and a Daisy' rather than 'He Loves Me Not' - more creative than using a cliche line, and has alliteration too :). Love the going backwards in time idea: its different and adds inevitability. Made it even more chilling. Anyways, my favourite line (besides the last one, it was amazing) has to be "His tongue lolled gently from his mouth, his body paralyzed. Narcissa picked up his plate and walked to the kitchen." Fantastic contrast!
Anyway, I'm off to see if you've written anything else (god I hope so) and if so I'll no doubt review them. Congrats on one of the best one-shots I've ever read!