Reviews for My not so happy family
numba1taylorfan4life chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
tehe very good Fire Coral i take it you like My Family as much as I do! :)
lexophile42 chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
It was good. Shouldn't have ended so many sentences with '!'. It was interesting though. I rather enjoyed it. I hope to see more from you in the near future.

-Miss Lexx
AngelEyes87 chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
Haha, that was funny. My suggestion for you is to add more detail in the story.
beccapants chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
I thought you got the characters, especially Ben and Susan, down to an art. However, I think it needs more of a story line, nothing much happened.
vampirate chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
a really good chapter. i look forward to reading more from you
Eowyn chapter 1 . 5/11/2006
I think you should really bring more characters in and make a better plot because nothing very much happened that hasn't happened before. However you have capture the interaction between the characters very well. You should really continue and make it more interesting.
flight815surviver chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
HE he i love nick and ben brilliant.
smeggy1987 chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
great story
Dancing Turtle chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
hahahahahah...you had nick and ben down to T! well done girl!
XxBeautyFairytaleOfJorrieXx chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
Wow really good keep it up
Musical Note chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
It may be random but It's better than the TV shows
Paperback Rita chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
Pretty good. You have captured the general mood of the story.
marius123 chapter 1 . 12/7/2005
Great fic! a comment at the end frrom Nick would have finished it off nicely but that is still a good laugh. Keep it up!