|Reviews for Tool Taylor's|
| jojochild chapter 6 . 2/20/2006
u didn't even tell us what was going on!
| jojochild chapter 5 . 2/20/2006
SO FUNNY! LMHO! or LMAO. depends on rather u cuss or not. (i'm ramling. i like to ramble) it is soo amazing how u can capture the characters like that. I CAN SOO SEE HIM DOING THAT!
| jojochild chapter 4 . 2/20/2006
JILLS PRAYER WAS SOO SWEET! and i am so like Tim when I go to church. its all, "look there's the door. wait, ure going in the wrong direction! NO!" great chapter.
| jojochild chapter 3 . 2/20/2006
just a litte short...
| jojochild chapter 2 . 2/20/2006
the last sentance is a very nice touch.
| Miss Kells Bells chapter 7 . 2/19/2006
dude, your going to do 55 moments? Okay then. That will take while. Anyway. I like your wrting. It's really good. And I remebered when you swore during the shcool one. It wascool how you put it in. Not like other stories were people swear outof control like crazy, and it's just dumb. I like your writing.
| Ron's Sweetie chapter 7 . 2/19/2006
Great chapter i love it keep going with it.
| Ron's Sweetie chapter 6 . 1/21/2006
Great chapter i love it please keep going with it.
You are one hell of a writer
| Ron's Sweetie chapter 5 . 1/9/2006
Good story keep going
| Em'sPride chapter 5 . 1/9/2006
Aw, that was super cute! I loved it! It was so sweet and meaningful. Great work, yet again!
| Em'sPride chapter 4 . 12/6/2005
That was nice. You told the story perfectly, and the characters were spot on. Sometimes swearing comes off tacky and useless, but you used it to its' full potential. I especially loved in the school chapter, right at the end. Take that bitch! Loved it!
| Ron's Sweetie chapter 4 . 10/17/2005
Great story i like it so far keep going with it