|Reviews for An Accident in Motion|
| RavenSerendipity chapter 8 . 3/29
This was really good despite the many grammatical errors. And tge errors weren't too distracting from the story since it was still understandable. Hmm, I guess that bonus chapter isn't happening though, huh? Oh well, good job.
| TheStarshipCat chapter 8 . 7/16/2014
Wow, I loved that story. At first I thought they were a little out of character but it was well explained. And I love BBRae stories that include nevermore. When affection looked at that twenty dollar bill I laughed out loud. And their back stories were pretty accurate. All in all, out was a great story. Have a waffle!
| Boo yah chapter 4 . 7/6/2014
What would an emotion do with 20 dollars.
| TheRagingRussian chapter 8 . 11/29/2013
Wow, what a good story.
| BethyQuake chapter 3 . 10/27/2013
Poor bb it must be hard he thought he was going to die I mean that would scar anyone
| BethyQuake chapter 2 . 10/27/2013
Sorry raven but if you did that to me I awoke have Pooped myself and died of a heart attack soo... Ya
| Texus Kent chapter 8 . 7/20/2012
Your grammar is horrible at times but that may be the single greatest story I have ever read. Fantastic job! :)
| lovingo0Kawaii0oGirl chapter 8 . 9/2/2010
| nekoken chapter 8 . 9/8/2009
hey great first story, lots of small errors that could be fixed easily just by taking out a word here or a word there and some grammar errors that I fixed in my head while i was reading but still a great concept and a good story. keep writing and i am sure that those errors will be less and less the more you progress in your writing skills
| nekoken chapter 3 . 9/7/2009
Hey great story so far just wanted to say I picked up a lot more grammar errors in the last two chapters compared too the first. most of them are easily caught and would be good to get rid of at some point in time. but doesn't matter to me cause I will probably never read those chapters again so do what ever you want. Still like the story and the errors are not bad enough to really impair the reader too much so its not a big deal. so keep up the good work and Ill continue reading now
| schemily200 chapter 8 . 2/15/2007
I CRIED! WAHH! beautiful...
You're a great writer!
NEVER DOUBT YOUR SKILL!
| FireDitto chapter 8 . 10/31/2006
I really enjoyed your story. The only thing that really got to me, was that you seemed to swap between past and present format at times. Other than that, it was good, and I enjoyed reading it.
| titanfan45 chapter 8 . 9/30/2006
This was your first FanFic ? Awesome job. Really enjoyed should write more.
| karatekid34 chapter 5 . 9/29/2006
perfect chapter 5
| HeartOfRaven chapter 8 . 9/9/2006
great story! cant wait till the next chapter is up. tell me when it is k?