|Reviews for The Future|
| HiroLemonFan chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
So what did the essay say?
| cheesesandwichesandgrapesoda chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
I like it,i think that it has great potential.
| PenName2 chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
Nice fic. Hope to read more from you
| Kuki chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
What did it say? I want to read it, add one more chapter and then its done.
| Gigawolf1 chapter 1 . 10/21/2005
Deep-end characters who have been brainwashed...
| Evilevergreen chapter 1 . 10/20/2005
This had me thinking. . . "English must be the author's second language."
But then I checked out your profile and everything seems to be written in English. So I don't under why the tenses are so off in this one-shot.
The concept in a nice one to explore, but it distracting when you have to reread something to figure out what you are trying to say. I suggest you look over it and if you still can't seem to get past the tense problem try getting a beta-reader. It should help.
Anyway, congrats on you first KND fanfic, I hope to see more. )
| meh chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
ooh i love the ending. please update!