Reviews for Forgive Us Our Debts
Magery chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
I'd say those last two lines make this fic, except that would imply it wasn't brilliant before then.
Jestry chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
"It’s no big deal, though.

I only owe you everything."

Wow, that pretty much sums it up.
the-coconut-bubble chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
Oh, Nathaniel. He finally confesses. THIS is how the book should have ended, without the whole (tear-inducing) Bartimaeus monologue. Sigh. Well done.
Anime-Girl145 chapter 1 . 12/15/2007
*Cries* I feel so sad now because Nathaniel shouldn't have died. I mean, I hated him in the second book and some of the third but... the ending was so sad. Well, I love this fanfic. Good job
GreyKitten chapter 1 . 8/27/2007

*wipes tear away*

I always hated nathaniel, he was evil, but that was sosweet, you made him seem like he had a soul, and was repenting his sins in the next life. Cudos to you!

*claps hands*

Woot! U rock!
timidhinata chapter 1 . 1/31/2007
*bows to your greatness* I'm not worthy, I'm not worthy!

Love your fic so much_!
ValkyrieRavenfeather chapter 1 . 1/22/2007
Good work. It's nice to see one of these written from Nathaniel's POV instead of Bartimaeus's or Kitty's. It's very well-written, too.
jessie chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
i liked this alot

i finshed reading it.

i creid, im still crying, andstill will

jonathan stroiud shouldn't have kiled hjim off like tht. im pretty depresed. i loved this fanfiction so much.
PadfootPet chapter 1 . 5/9/2006
I just finished the book today. HE DIES? (crying uncontrollably). I loved Nathaniel, he can't die, he is supposed to stay with Kitty (still crying). Crap, that's not fair, anyway, you were the first person I read a fanfic from Bartimous, and I liked it, sorry but I had to get my anger out on someone. Once again, this is a cute monologue.
Cyberbanjo chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
*sighs sadly* Great job with this. I just finished Ptomely's Gate tonight, and I'm still teary eyed about the ending (I spent about 10 minutes trying to find evidence of missing pages -_-; ). This was amazing. Sorry if I'm not that enthusiastic, but I really liked this, even if I don't really show it. I'm gonna go cry now...
tanyart chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
That was stunning! Very well written and it was nothing short of what I expected it to be. Actually, quite the opposite. It made me sad all over again. Thank you for sharing your work. This is definately a fav.
Darth Sonic chapter 1 . 1/19/2006
Wow, what a great little fic! Keep up the good work _!
Candelabra chapter 1 . 1/17/2006


Goes perfectly with Gratitude. I think I'm going to go and cry in a corner now. I've read too many depressing fics about Nathaniel's death ...
InuDani chapter 1 . 1/16/2006
*sniffle* that... was soo awsome...

Rachael chapter 1 . 1/16/2006
Geez, I keep on crying when I read these post ptolemy's gate fics.

This was so sad! It was really good though, and really well done.

Oh, by the way, I honestly can't decide which one I liked better: Ptolemy's Gate or A Game of Chess. I definitely liked your ending better. Just had to say that.
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