Reviews for They'll Save You
PeacefullyJos chapter 1 . 2/24
loved this sm.
Betterways chapter 1 . 9/29/2016
Well it didnt seem logical for the force to go to all that trouble to create Anakin and then do nothing. Like send more visions to more people, including Padme who is sharing bodily fluis with 2 powerful beings. Fluids that carry midichlorians.

I also hardly think Anakin would run to the temple without first stopping to get Padme out of the building with the sith lord. And then they would have talked about what to do. Theres so many things wrong with ROTS...
Childatheart28 chapter 1 . 6/30/2016
Way to go unborn Luke and Leia!
Balthanon chapter 1 . 5/27/2016
My niece recently watched the last episode in the prequel trilogy and was apparently really upset about the fact that Amidala dies and Anakin becomes evil. (Though she knew about Darth Vader being Luke's father, since she had seen the original, it apparently not quite registered.) My sister asked me to write a fanfic where the opposite happens and it looks like this one means I may not need to do that. This looks to be exactly what she was looking for to show her that it could happen another way though. Thanks for writing it.
talerano chapter 1 . 1/2/2016
nice story! But if Windu had defeated Sidious, then Anakin wouldn't be the Chosen one, Windu would.
Mari Wollsch chapter 1 . 12/16/2015
lovely xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
novelreader chapter 1 . 10/20/2015
I don't like the fact that Mace was the one who kills Palpatine, whose technically the last Sith Lord. In the books and movie Palpatine's very powerful and seemed to be toying with Windu then acting weak all to turn Anakin on purpose. No, Anakin is the Chosen One, he's destined to end the Sith (and apparently the Jedi?), anyway other than that, I really loved this fic. I could see the twins doing that, especially if this was like a time travel fic and their subconscious was transferred as far into their mother's womb, they would sense what their father was doing and the conflict in him too and stop the terrible future that was to pass from happening. That would be an interesting story idea huh, the twins guiding their father to reach his full potential as the Chosen One as he was meant too.
shoesareoverrated chapter 1 . 10/17/2015
bloody brilliant! so this how it should have ended if the twins hadn't of intervened. Absolutely on the edge of my chair reading! thank you
Ani's Girl chapter 1 . 3/4/2015
the best ROTS ending I have ever read. ever.
kris chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
I love how the twins saved their father from the dark side.
):(
VioletEyes14 chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
Yay! Happy endings! Loved it!
Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Aw! I like it. Luke and Leia refusing to let their father go bad. Fabulous idea. :D
Lalaith Quetzalli chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
Oh my...

You know, this actually seems logical, for the baby to be willing to do anything to make sure nakin wouldn't turn, even risk death.

And it fits with cannon.

I liked this fic.

Wish I could know how everyone else reacted to things when the news of the Skywalkers became public-knowledge.
HolmesAndWatsonAwkwardHug chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
A great story. Very good.
ClarksonHammondAndMay chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
omg that was gr8 writing keep it up XD
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