Reviews for Bloodstain Yachiru and the Laundry Technician
slice-of-insanity chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
I had to reread the story before I finally realized that Yachiru is the new Kenpachi of the eleventh division.

And then I cried inside ;( Every time Yachiru sees that coat, she is going to remember how she got it.

Really pretty piece! The ending in particular really hits home.
magdilen chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
That was really interesting and well done. Yachiru's characterization was spot on. The only thing is, I find it hard to believe that any shinigami wouldn't know the names of all the taicho's in Seireitei.
letmeupme chapter 1 . 11/19/2010

Bloodthirsty friendship and grisly messages aside, this made me feel all warm and cuddly. I think X]
n chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
Bob Dole chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
Pretty damn good. Glad I read it. I'd like to see a sequel, but I don't really know where you could go with something like that other than Zaraki's return... ah well, I guess I'll just be satisfied with this.

Thanks for writing.

Later days,

Bob Dole
TheInflictedFinger chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
OMFG hsgiushfjshfkj PLEASE a sequel PLEASE? ;_; Such a wonderful beautiful story and...and... this can't be the end?
Tannim Murphy chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
I think this is one of the true gems of the fandom. Excellent on all accounts; good characterization, good story flow, great plot elements, and fantastic ending.
lirance chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
Very sad and sweet. The thought of Zaraki wandering around randomly killing people and shouting messages at them is hilarious in a dark way. I liked Keisuke- it's easy to sympathise with him. Yachiru is very well characterised, this is how I can imagine her sense of grief and loss. Thank you for posting this
Artificial Life Creator chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
that was wonderful! everything was great!
Ash of Mine chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
You make me cries and cries and cries throughout the story...and smile in the end! It's a wonderful story! o

Water85 chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
-sobs- It was funny and it was sad, the last line tore me up! You're an incredible writer.
kimmi kitsune chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
i love the story and think it is a good representation of the yachiru kusajishi kenpachi zaraki relationship i cant wait for oyu to come out with the sequel and when you do could you please send it to me at

Kimmi Kitsune

Captains assistant

11th division combat squat

13 court guards
boXx chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
gawd, i wuz feelin' nostalgic.. read this fic almost one and a half years ago? yupp.. suddenly remembered this fic and decided to revisit it.. am hearing it with rja your guardian angel.. cryin' as i'm readin.. damn.. there ain't much zaraki/yachiru fics as awesome as this.. excellent stuff
Unsane Chibi chapter 1 . 6/7/2007

This is awesome.
Scarlet Amaranth chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
That was awesome o I was in tears while reading this (T_T) loved the part where Kenpachi sent his message through Keisuke. I even liked the OC's first person narrative. *favorites*
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