HOLY! my friend, you are a MASTER storyteller, i mean, you even got me tearing a bit! all i can say is WOW! keep writing, and you will have a lifelong fan! absolutly beautiful!

~Ghost

SO SAD! SO GOOD. But still so sad! Loved it it's a real peice of unique art. I haven't had the pleasure of checking out any of your other story's but that is something I indeed intend to correct ASAP! You are an awesome writer and don't worry dark stuff is cool. Yeah I'm weird I admit.

Wow - that was completely awesome. Your descriptions, particularly of pain, are very vivid. Nice work.

AAH!

And once again, you have drawn me in with your descriptive prowess, Oh President of Angst Incorporated. Wow.

*shivers* Poor Donnie! Well, that's who I think it is, based on the clues you gave us. I mean, who else would have had to TELL his brothers to home in on the Shell Cell signal. I suppose I should be saying Poor April too, but at least she's at peace.

I meant to review as I went. You know, stop here and there and make comments. I'm beginning to wonder why I bother even trying to do that with your works because I never do. It's IMPOSSIBLE I tell you! I get too caught up in your stories (which is a GOOD thing, by the way) so here I am at the end of another one of your installments and trying to come up with something to fill this empty box with other than WOW, which pretty much sums it up, but always seems kinda empty at the same time.

"Be wary of the unpredictability of amateurs, for luck will sometimes turn in their favor." That's good advice, not just in a fight.

That last line is bittersweet and absolutely amazing. Heartbreaking for Donnie, but April is in (or at the very least, well on her way to) a better place. *wipes away a tear*

Cheers,

~pacphys~

girl, you just kicked the bucket! she's dead? I'm guessing it was Raph, but since he's not using slang, then maybe it was Leo or Don, I'm not sure... everything else tells me it's Raph, though...

wonderful piece :3

This is a very touching story. I believe that the missing fact about which turtle is with April is on purpose. Whether or not this is true, I find it rarther inspiring, for it could be all four of the guys.

I haven't read your other stories, but I will soon make it up to you. Again, really nice story...

Hey D!

Faithful beta that I am, I am here to review your finished work. And how could I not, with such high praise that you gave me? :-P

Loved the visual of the 'mystery mutant' dealing with the thugs without dropping the bags- it's a throwback to their 'coolness' and savwafaire. (Okay, just butchered the french language there- what can I say? I take Spanish. I'm a lost cause.)

Ugh. Spinning roundhouses were my utter NIGHTMARE when I took tae kwon do... I'd always fall, or hit the person next to me...

I see you took my advice about the shooting scene. It looks even better then before! It flows much better too.

"A corded line of muscle at the base of his throat flexed..." *Melts* Oh... Muscles hot turtle men... yum... LOL!

Simply amazing job, D. I think this could be safely called, 'one of your best works.'

:)

~RD

Awesome story here, tragic yet really touching. Well written.

Akumu - nightmare or bad dream. Very creative title.

GAH.,.yes, you do well with tragedy, all too well. Sheesh, and I was thinking of going to bed.

Not now, though, not after reading this wonderfully morose story.

Not much to say other than, well done! This left me speechless - almost - and pretty much spent emotionally.

Great job!

Be blessed.