This chapter made me squeal with happiness. This is what Anakin should have done and I can't wait to see what happens next. Thank you for sharing.

A very nice ending, well done

This is a great story. At the end, after reading it for 24 hours(minus the hours allotted for sleep) I was left feeling the need for more. Do you plan on writing a sequel or perhaps a series of one shots or short stories in this universe? I'd love to see more Obi-Wan chasing Anakin or perhaps finally realizing the truth...

I loved this! It's absolutely everything I ever wanted after seeing the tragic fate of Anakin and Padme in film. I always loved them so I really enjoyed your fic and how you explored what could have been. It was even believable to the star wars universe. Perfection. Thank you for writing!

Loved it. Stayed up all night...:)

Oh, this was beautiful. I really, really cannot describe how wonderful this was. Because Padmé deserved a better ending, and so did Anakin. And Luke and Leia, of course. Honestly, this was a perfect way to diverge from canon and give people happy endings. Except for Obi-Wan, he will be quite heartbroken. :(

Thank you for writing this, Author-sempai. :D

The best darren in this Ff site!

Will u please do a sequal? Thx!

Cute.

Best Anakin darred scene...I loved them in chapter 16!

I have read a lot of fanfiction and encountered many instances in which people comment about how "out of character" some stories appear to be.

In this case though I think that the story as you have told it might be one of the most genuine and likely scenarios that the movie-canon characters might have been compelled to follow given the alternative choice you made for them.

Other than the rather abrupt scene changes in some places, it was a great fic. Thanks for sharing it.

What a perfect story. I'm so glad I took the time to read it. If there's something you've captured just right, it's the absolute love that Anakin and Padme have for each other and for their children, and I truly love this version of them. I think ROTS took things a little too far - especially with the Temple Massacre and Anakin's naivety, and it was just so nice to read a well-written fic where the events derailed beforehand. Thank you so much for sharing. ~dra6on

I loved it and finished reading it in a day, but I'm slightly disappointed that we didn't get to see Ani tell the order about Padme and his family.

This has been the 12th time I have read this and I am not lying. I first read this story in 2011!

Eight years later and still loving this fanfic. Hope that a sequel will be written even if it has been so many years.