Reviews for Agent Apollus FBI
ShatteredIce18 chapter 7 . 7/20
Turning point! Mary works for the FBI?!
It's a great fanfiction, although I spotted some holes here and there. And Mary's out of character.
Anyway, hope you can post!
IFoundWaldoHere chapter 7 . 9/1/2012
well...this is a little weird...but i like it! write more! ;)
GingahNinjah chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
Bella and Jacob fan 423 chapter 7 . 7/5/2010
That was funny. You should write another chapter.
Backroads chapter 7 . 6/12/2010
Oh Mary! She would be!
James MacPherson chapter 7 . 6/10/2010
Yeah, we finally have an update. I was afraid we wouldn't see more. It's a good and amusing story, which I like.

Mary working with the FBI? I assume there's an amusing back story to all this? Especially to Harry's reaction when (or if) he found out.
The Lark chapter 6 . 5/26/2010
Yay, it's good to see an update after all these years! My fave:

"My idiot centurion of a husband is in the FBI and we thought it would be hilarious to come here and play with walkie-talkies. We're complete losers.

"I'm pregnant?" she suggested."

lol, you've gotta love Meagan.
onehighpeanut chapter 6 . 5/17/2010

You know the second i read the title i laughed my head off. This could definitely get interesting. So the question is who is this evil ninja? It could be the Asp or it could be the FBI making sure that Apollus is still on his guard! Either way you should update... and by update, i don't mean in four years... that's a bit long to wait

Any way can't wait to see what comes next

and if it is the Asp guy... eh i would have had a little bit more rising action before throwing the main evil dude in...

roudyredd chapter 6 . 5/10/2010
YOU'RE ALIVE! I've been waiting for an update. lol.

Nice to hear from u again. I like tennis shoes and I didn't find an interesting one till i saw this story. You're doing a good job. Keep it up. But don't feel obligated. you;re doing great. -Redd
Hero in the Making chapter 6 . 5/10/2010
Yeah You updated! I loved it. Now update sooner.
Hero in the Making chapter 5 . 12/22/2009
I liked it! Update soon. PLEASE!
megan chapter 5 . 10/23/2009
hurry an finish it!A.S.A.P...

by the way i love it! lol
masonangel chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
You write really well. I'm LDS too. Guess what? I'm also Mia maid 1st Counselor! That's so cool!
nraia chapter 5 . 1/18/2009
Mackiwaki chapter 5 . 12/28/2008
hahahaha, I love Apollus... haha. R ya gonna keep writing? : )
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