Reviews for Helpless
jags chapter 1 . 6/3/2014
Very nice. Wonderful writing and great story. Would be interesting to see more of this line
Uruwashii Inochi chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
You know, rape fics aren't really my thing, but I like how you didn't go into any detail on it, yet somehow gave your readers the severity of the situation and how terrible it was for Kaylee. Fantastic job.
Michelann chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
I am A little suprised but, I liked it. I hate that Kaylee was the victom but, it was showed a nice side of Jayne. Over all a good, short read. Shiny!
Thorfinna chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
Shiny.

Why? Because you made it believable without being graphic.
Expecting Rain chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
Very shiny! Everyone was in character and I like how hopeful it is. :)
Phantasmal Abduction chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
Personally I think this was shiny as all hell :D

Very well written and very convincing. You portrayed the characters perfectly in my opinion and I didn't want to stop reading it lol.

Going to check your other stories now :P
lovesickdinosaurs chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
I loved reading about Jayne being the hero! I also liked how you kept it canon. Great work!
fierynightangel chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
one of the better ones that i've read. pretty good.
Barkers chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
Its hard to make rapefics readable but I think you did well. i don't normally read them and will often stop reading a story when it crops up. But this was well written, it was more about friendship and trust. Well done!
yoshi09 chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
This was soothingly good. And realistic.
rheenielabeth chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
You are right, rapefics are prolific and many do suck. I don't think this one fits that category. Plot bunnies rarely cooperate and I think you did a good job with this one. You stayed ic while adding a bit of depth to the characters you were working with. I think you did a good job.
Aganippe chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
Wow...

Look, I like to think of myself as a tallented author, I've been told so on many an occasion. But you blow everyone else out of the water.

Seriously.

This story, like, WAS Jayne. Everything, thoughts AND descriptions, were straight out of his head. The style of writing, the expressions, the descriptions. The mannerisms. Jesus, this story is like an episode that just walked off the screen in written form.

I've told people they're great writers, and I always mean it. But you are just amazing. You made me get in Jayne's head, and that wasn't exactly a place I wanted to be until I read this. Now I like him, I usually just want to smack him upside the head. Even though he's hilarious sometimes.

And don't worry about abusing the topic. I'm sure it's been done, but this story didn't abuse it, it saluted it. If any of these stories are worth while reading, this sure is.

Wow. Okay, not to seem overly flattering or anything, but I'm completely serious. You're a great author. Congrats.
DxLilith chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
No you did a wonderful job! I mean, yeah rapefics are done to death, but you didnt make it incredibly soppy & you kept the characters...in character. lol. great job. _
deadly-neko chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
More than shiny!

Like brilliant!

You played the characters in my mind wonderfully.

I just wish there was a bit more lovin between Jayne and Kaylee. I mean I realize that there couldn't really be loving because of the whole rape thing but maybe if she thought more of Jayne instead of Simon. Or something like that.
angeloneous chapter 1 . 8/9/2007
I just found this story and I wanted to tell you that I think you did an amazing job. The emotion is so real and seeing it through Jane's eyes makes it really grip you. Thank you so much for sharing this. Well done!
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