Reviews for Gratitude
C'sMelody chapter 1 . 11/9/2014
Love this little fic. Short, simple, sweet and in character.
Lord Xantos A. Fowl chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
man this is way too much agast, not in this story in particular but as an example of the pattern, while almost every one, yours included, is beautiful, it's just that , can anyone make something happy out of this, not ooc but maybe AU?
like maybe as he's laying there dyeing, he feels such incredible pain then nothing then silence, darkness then he realizes that his eyes are squeazed shut and he can here city noises, and he slowly opens his eyes finding himself short and ending up in his room from when he was an apprentice
that would be a story to read!
the-coconut-bubble chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
Wonderful. Much, much better than a "sentimental idiot" could have written. I must admit, my heart leaped a bit at the end. Stupid, huh?
Fabelie chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
WHy are all the oneshots amazing! omg! you should not make this a oneshot... or make a story.
Grey Blade chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
Okay what is this? I just read three stories (yours included) in a row that makes me almost want to cry. Believe you, me, that is no small feat. If you keep this up I might put you in my "Hall of Even More Awesome Authors".

In this story, the one that really caught me was the last two paragraphs. It was there that I started to feel Kitty's sadness.
Tezuya chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
I really enjoyed this story. I can find nothing to criticize. Kitty is extremely in character, and this story was so well-written I would consider it a small continuation to the actual story. Great job, I loved this fic.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
Ouch. It still hurt, really. Even more so because of what could have been. The possibilities. I should have known that it wasn't so when he got his side blown off. Even the amulet, but I wished it did. Thank you for writing this. It put my mind at ease to know that in your version, Kitty is still willing to fight and continue on in London. *Sigh* Really, it hurts...
mysteryshadow chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
Again, you leave me to tears. I wonder, do you write for a profession in real life? I love angsty one-shots. But yours are one of the best things I've ever read. It's so sad how the Bartimaeus Trilogy ended. But then again, I don't think any other way could have suited it any better. Overall, an awesome job!
Random Stuff About Stuff chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
Poor Kitty. That was really sweet. Ha! I got a short review... NO! I ruined it.

Well done.
ladyaymie chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
*MOUTH DROPS OPEN* O aw man, i was just getting over the shock of his death too! eh well. this sounds remarkably like something kitty would say, though. but its so sad! really leaves you with this empty feeling, you know? yeah...
aniene chapter 1 . 3/2/2006
This is really great.. i like the last few lines expecially
Guest chapter 1 . 2/18/2006
Wah! Youre making me cry...

Beautiful and sad... *sniffles*
Candelabra chapter 1 . 1/17/2006


I think I'm going to cry. It's just so perfect and sad ...

I think I'm going to have to write a fanfic where Nathaniel didn't die ... It's just too depressing. :'(
Rachael chapter 1 . 1/16/2006
That's so sad! I loved that.

Not much more to say.
Jezunya chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
Oh gosh...

I screamed when I read the end of the book (well, yelled in frustration, anyway), but this made me cry. Poor Kitty. You wrote her perfectly (altho it was a bit disconcerting at first to read it in first person, after three books of 'I' always referring to Bartimaeus). This whole fic has the exact same tone of that one line she mutters at the end, "So much for your promises..." or something like that.

I really liked how there was just a slight hint of Nat/Kitty in this, too. Nothing over done, like some many people seem to be doing - they're not declaring their undying love for each other yet or anything, but there was a bond there. Nathaniel finally came full circle and became a truly good person in the end, and Kitty saw that. /Sigh/ They really deserved to have a happy ending together... ;_;

Great fic! I can't wait to read more of your writing :')
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