Nice ideas, but its a bit baadly written.

Just inquiring, but wouldn't this be the moment that Brigader Lethbridge-Stewart and the UNIT organisation come to the fore?

You know, "Backs to the wall, We band of brothers, Never in the field of human conflict was so much owed, by so many, to so few", etc.

After all, the Brig, Sgt. Benton and co. were my favourite characters.

Great story, really cool poem Update soon

Interesting...

All right so far, just watch your grammar.

Keep up the good work!