|Reviews for Stop, Drop, and Roll|
| Jedi Takeru chapter 1 . 10/21/2005
I submit to you that Takeru would not casually use the 'f' word. He'd find another suitable word, but using the 'f' word doesn't seem like him, even if he IS 14 in this fic. Otherwise...pretty good fic. I've read better, but I've read much worse...so other than the line I'm complaining about...pretty good job.
| Gogglehead Lover chapter 1 . 10/20/2005
Good story ahah. Bye