Reviews for Eternal Sunshine
tanithlipsky chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
Smexy Kitten chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
That is such a Sanzo reaction xD... This really is a cute story!
AlfredisMyHero chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
this is so sad but Goku is so cute!GOKU IS SEXY dont u agree?
CornflowerBlue chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
wow, how do you write this stuff anyways? cool, really good...
Alleonh chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
two things


"He just wanted the Sun to be real again"



"This Sun wasn't very nice"

hahahahahahaha! That is so perfect!

You made Sanzo perfect I love it! And his reaction to Goku telling him his name? Perfect! omg it's just... perfect.


I think I'm saying perfect too much...

But it is! It's...

SylverAngel chapter 1 . 2/13/2006
Lol. That was cute! I liked the disoriented feel to it!
Kitsune3ksj chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
This is a really neat idea, I like the images with " the sun" etc.. Now I must applaude you, you've managed to really get Sanzo's character, good job! The confusion and oddity to Goku's character is quite interesting, it kind of makes you think... anyway keep writing.

Shella chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
Sanzo: I hate you.

Goku: You love me!

Sanzo: ...Don't push your luck.

asian princess 61 chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
aw *giggles* that's so cute. good job!
Sekowari chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
Yup yup, Sanzo will always be Goku's sun so cute *sniff*
Blahsblah2001 chapter 1 . 11/26/2005

He thought Sanzo was the sun?

That's abut strange. I mean, yeah, the yellow. Aw, what the hell.

Whatever he thinks he's probably right. (After five hundred years of nothing but the occasional bird, I guess you think in a lot of metaphors.)
Lost Demon102 chapter 1 . 10/23/2005
Cuteness is eating me...
dream-eater-is-hungry chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
aw that was so cute!
Ditch Gospel chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
This is very sweet, well done! I like several things about it. First of all, I liked the idea of Goku thinking that maybe underneath the bird's golden colouring he could find something more, only to end up with blood on his hands. That was deeply touching. I also liked how Goku called the real sun fake, and how he called Sanzo Sun. That was cute, and Sanzo's reaction was perfect too. I like the last line, as well. Very fitting.

You may want to read through this fic again, as I did catch a couple of typos. Also, I just want to point out that birds say "cheep", not "cheap"!

Wow, I just have to say, you are on one major creative streak lately, what do you do, write 24 hours a day? I wish I could have as many ideas as you! Keep up the good work!
Miss Goku chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
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