|Reviews for The Lost Future|
| Acheron Blake chapter 1 . 10/29/2016
Wow! This is an incredible story filled with all of the right twists, turns, heartaches, and moments it needs. You have an incredible grasp on the Charmed universe and a wonderful way of weaving together character, setting, plot, and emotion to tell a gripping story.
I do admit to liking Chris with more power, not Twice Blessed, but will electrokinesis or something else to pair with his telekinesis. I do understand why you stayed true to the idea of the show however and I respect it.
I cannot get over how great this is. I hope you're still reading these reviews. Five stars!
| realpestilence chapter 3 . 8/31/2016
There are plenty of other non-Halliwell witches out there in the world, using their powers, who aren't Charmed Ones or Twice Blessed. It's a weak excuse, no wonder Chris is fed up with it. Adding how he gets talked down to like a toddler, and I'd have moved out of the Manor as soon as I turned 18, if I were him.
I've read this story before. Still get plenty annoyed, every time, lol.
| dramaqueen452 chapter 52 . 7/14/2013
Resisted reviewing, was gonna do it at the end but had to. Nooooo Bianca! Have neva liked her but u made me fall inlove with her. Hated the way Piper was so self righteous with her. N omg the Charmed ones are such hypocrites. They are all ' we hate u coz u were evil in another timeline so tht means u are always evil, but Wyatt is different, lets not mention tht he was an evil over lord at all. N phoboe urghhhh. U can't hv a relationship with someone n keep em out of some aspects of yo life... poor Chris though.
Rambling over, yo story is brill n I'm enjoying it immensely
| Keeper of the Times chapter 61 . 3/9/2013
Daaaaaaaaaamn. That was an epic story. It legitimately made me cry, as in tears pouring down my face. I read this whole thing in like two days too. Holy cow! Anyway, this was an excellent story. Characters were in character. No plot holes. Vey well written and original. All very good qualities. A few spelling errors but none were blatantly obvious. (I'm a grammar and spelling nazi) To sum it all up? Excellent!
| Aynessa chapter 15 . 11/30/2012
Loving this story so far! Can't believe I've never seen it before.
I think I finally figured out what that gold light is doing to them with this chapter! Seems like it's slowly trying to merge, or possibly convert, those people's personalities into what they were in the original Chris' world. Leo suddenly becoming unconcerned with Chris, Prue not caring about her family as much as before, Wyatt filled with uncontrollable rage...it all seems to be pointing towards that other world. Seems like the Seer is trying to recreate that world.
Just my thoughts. Looking forward to the next chapters!
| kasey123 chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
| xXxShiniXKazexXx chapter 61 . 7/25/2011
Very brilliant~! ;)
| Guest chapter 25 . 6/29/2011
If I were Jason, I'd have left a long time ago! Self-righteous, better-than-you Halliwells make me sick!
| Guest chapter 10 . 6/29/2011
I hate to break it to the oh-so-special Charmed Blessed Halliwell types, but people face danger, do brave deeds, and risk themselves for good every day-without magic. And they do pretty damn well at it! I wonder how much more effective Chris could have been-not to mention happier-if he'd been properly magically educated, so he could defend himself, as well as other people? It makes NO sense to leave him defenseless! He can't live in Piper's very pocket for the rest of his life!
| Guest chapter 6 . 6/29/2011
Chris is dating a girl, and Wyatt and co keep making cracks about her being evil, even though they don't know her. How dense do they have to be to not get that it bothers him, even if they didn't realize he's in love? Pretty dense, obviously! o.0
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/29/2011
So not teaching Chris things, having secrets, and not letting him be the person he is is supposed to be "protecting" him? Yeah, because all the other witches in the world who fight evil are all Charmed Ones or Twice Blessed, lol.
| twiggy31 chapter 61 . 4/4/2011
ok you had me in tears at that last chapter! loved loved loved the entire story! Prue was my favourtie character, but it was alll so amazing! you are such a good writer! :D
| KuroitsukiNoMai chapter 61 . 3/7/2011
Wow, that was... epic o.O Seriously. 61 chapters? o.O And each and every one of them was GREAT! .
Thank you SO much, I loved it!
| ForeverRainingFire chapter 25 . 11/7/2010
Fantastic! The bit about Lewis Carroll and Through the Looking Glass was pure genius. Very witty!
| ForeverRainingFire chapter 17 . 11/6/2010
Amazing story so far! I really like it! Only bad thing is that it's going to distract me from my homework from now until I finish it... haha, oh well. I would give you a better review, but it's almost 2am at the moment, so expect me to give you a better review in the future : ) Awesome story!