Reviews for The Will to Be Strong: Legends in The Making
CookieCrumbleMilkSplash0331 chapter 24 . 8/11/2008
update soon please~! this chapter was really good. and i really liked all the fights
Sedona chapter 24 . 8/5/2008
THERES NO MORE CHAPTERS! TT Are you still not done? Well you have to hurry! My sanity depends on it! PLZ?
Sedona chapter 24 . 8/5/2008
I read it. I was pretty attentive to the first one but it was a doze in the second. I often got lost. But I perked back up in Sasuke's and Sakura's battle though. And Nani? Hinata's battle? Is she going against Taido or something...i'm hungry lol brb
Seodna chapter 23 . 8/5/2008
Well I could have done with not having to read some of the battles but I might be related to Shikamaru and that might be why lol. So do you have any pointers for writing battle scenes?
Sedona chapter 22 . 8/4/2008
SQEAUL! Sasuke has some gay admirers and I can't wait for Itachi and Orochimaru to bug the crap out of ,e. lol I'm gonna read the next chapter now XD
Sedona chapter 21 . 8/4/2008
ITACHI! I knew it! And I knew killing Sasori was gonna bite Sakura in the butt one of these days but still! Omg and omg. Is the second part of the book out yet because i'm a fast reader. when I last checked I had a 12th grade reading lvl and i'm checked when I was in 8th grade and i'm in ninth now but ARGH! Seriously. You know how you compare with charecters and think of them as an alternate version of yourslf? Well my alternate version for this anime(for some reason they're always involved with pink)is yes Sakura...I knew hanging around with just team 7 in general could not be healthy...but i'd take death over leaving them, too but still...Sasukes gonna be pissed when Itachi shows up...for Sakura i'm ranting
Sedona chapter 20 . 8/4/2008
omg. I went to go wash the dishes right and it dawned on me...the akatsuki are gonna be there then the odds of orochimaru being there AND murderous glares. When it clicked i kicked the cupoard so hard my grandma was flipping lol. i'm a little slow sometimes but i'm usually pretty fast other thatn that lol
Sedona chapter 19 . 8/4/2008
I think it was good. The stab in the heart was a little dramatic but oh well

Sedona chapter 17 . 8/4/2008
...ano...sumi-masen...but Sasuke seems to be more bad luck than Koun is. Poor Sakura. Itachi And Orachimaru who has Kabuto...but then again Itachi has Kisame. BUT still OMG! I wanna cry i'm a little freaked. i'm glad she got some good hits in on both Kabuto and Orochimaru though! Kya
Sedona chapter 16 . 8/4/2008
Aino Ailill chapter 13 . 8/4/2008
It was decent until you got to the point where they were moving in together. The concept that men resolve conflict with their fists and women don't goes in direct conflict with Ino and Sakura's rivalry and fight as well as Sakura's nature given how prone she is to violence.

Kakashi reprimanding the boys for yelling at Sakura when he did not reprimand Sakura yelling at them (which happened quite a bit) is off.

That Sakura was surprised and disapproving at their hostility towards each other seems hypocritical given that she was hostile to both over trivial matters.

It seems as if Sakura is becoming superior to the two as opposed to their equal. I dislike this.
Sedona chapter 15 . 8/4/2008
lol. i'm probably not going to reply as often because i'm gonna be busy reading the next chapter and GO KONOHAMARU CORPS! And go Sasuke getting hugged by extremely short people!
Sedona chapter 13 . 8/4/2008
lol. poor sasuke. add me on gaia. i'm SerenaMoonFairy. lol cheesy I know. anyways can't wait...if kabuto shows up though i'll kill him then orochimaru will have to live without his medic nin.
Sedona chapter 12 . 8/4/2008
continue. and I was hoping it was sai. sadness. i'd like to see sasuke kicking the crap out of him after calling SAkura ugly...then falling on his ass laughing when he called naruto dickless. lol that was weird anyways...
Sedona chapter 11 . 8/4/2008
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