Reviews for The Will to Be Strong: Legends in The Making
ShadowFang2391 chapter 10 . 6/9/2014
Did you see that?
You just said that you hated Mary Sues yourself! And LOOK WHAT YOU'RE DOING! What? You I can hear you asking.
You're making Sakura a Mary Sue! Everyone is empathic with her, EVERYONE'S forgiving with her, and EVERYONE HAS TO BE IMPRESSED WITH HER!
I hate you, I hate this fanfiction, and I'm leaving
Sasusaku Person chapter 7 . 6/9/2014
I used to love this story.
Now I'm going to stop reading because I hate it.
You're making Sakura a Mary Sue, in case you didn't notice, and making Itachi's attention and basically everyone's focus on her.
Her feelings.
Sasuke is a person too, he can be jealous and get mad at Sakura (who is a bitch in this story, by the way) too.
Naruto lover 19 chapter 10 . 5/19/2014
It's nukenin for rouge ninja and I love this story
AGirlTheGuest chapter 24 . 3/1/2014
Can you update now? tomorrow? next week?

The story is pretty good, no scratch that! The story is DAMN AMAZING!
And I'm not kidding! I've read a lot of books, fanfictions, and other literature and I can say it's one of my favorites and I hope you continue your story!

Also, I've been sharing your stories to some of my friends. ANNDD! They said your story is amazingly great! Keep up the good work, Tenshi no Hana-sama! And please update?
AmutoStAr7 chapter 2 . 2/11/2014
wha? no nummi bears foo me? lol

great chap!
Guest chapter 24 . 1/10/2014
i hope you pick up where you left off. i love the action and the originality in some of your jutsus for the fight scenes. and i appreciate the fluffy moments as well. this felt like i was reading a manga.
Guest chapter 24 . 11/24/2013
Please please please update! This story is too good to abandon!
xBeautifulCherryBlossomx chapter 24 . 11/13/2013
WOW you go girl! I love it honestly it's my favourite fanfiction now. I have read hundreds so far your story is second best. Tis says something you know :D i hoestly think that you deserve more reviews even though the number is anormous this story deserves more! Please don't discontinue a I have just realised that you haven't uploaded for 5 years now T.T please I'm begging you to continue. I love the small sasusaku progress :) the story and your writing skills are far too good to discontinue and just throw it all away. I know you dedicated a lot of time on this story so it would be kind of a waste o all that time if you stopped uploading/writing.
Enolaaa xxx chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
Aren't Sakura, Naruto and the others supposed to be 16/17 when they fight Sasori and Deidara?
CrystalBud chapter 9 . 11/1/2013
awesome :D
Guest chapter 24 . 10/9/2013
Update please
xFlipJamsx chapter 24 . 9/14/2013
please continue and update the story !
Minato4Yellowflash chapter 24 . 8/21/2013
I love your epic story! It's been a while since I've read something so long and really satisfying. Adventurous, with comedy mixed in, and bit of romance... Loved it! Wow, it's really a fully-written-in-depth story! The Chunin Exams were fun, and the Jonin Exams were breathtaking and thrilling! The labyrinth was a great idea, also. As for the first two fighting scenes in this chapter, I read it thoroughly! I like enjoying every bit of any great story I come across! Thanks for posting this on , and please update! I can't wait to see the results of the exams, and how much Team Seven's teamwork gets better!
Guest chapter 24 . 8/11/2013
Anooo you havnt updated and its been years
I mean i know you probably have stuff to do but can you try to update
Dont abandon the story it amazing
Serously i love it! And its getting more and more interesting :D
Well i hope you can update soon
Bye bye
Guest chapter 19 . 8/2/2013
I love it!
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