|Reviews for True Love Revealed|
| Luna chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
I feel like I just died and went to heaven I lovedd it
| jessi chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
Great story! I really enjoyed it!
| xxxanimefreakluverxxx chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
i luv luv luv luv it! ryou and ichigo r so cute together hehehe
| Very Annoied AIMelody chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
I would like to point out that you used Retasu's american name Bridget
| ravengal chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
Hmm... well, I'm a bit blank as to what to say, but I'll try.
Super cute fic revolving around Ryou/Ichigo love. They're my fave TMM couple.
The only thing that spoiled it (that spoiles ANY Ryou/Ichigo fic) was Masaya ONCE AGAIN randomly cheating on Ichigo. :( No explanation, nothing. I've seen it so much it's really starting to bother me. I couldn't fully appriciate the wonderful Ryou/Ichigo make-out scene coz I was feeling so bad for Masaya.
Anyway, aside from that, it was a pretty good one-shot. I loved the bit where Ichigo punched Ryou. XD That was funny.
Oh, lastly, some bits need work on... like putting things different characters say on different lines, rather than bunched into one paragraph... and Ryou not thinking in the third-person. XD
But yeah... not a bad read.
ravengal out x
| Devatron2000 chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
very good story.
| Perpetual Concern chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
Aww, how cute! RyouxIchigo 4eva!
| deadlykitty chapter 1 . 7/1/2007
cute! this was definately as good as your other one, but I must admit I like the other better. one question though, what about Keiichiro? he isn't injected with the genes... he's not gonna die is he? not keiichiro san! he's too cute! and he's gotta be over 25 by now, but I dunno his age in your fic. anyway, please write more!
| OfflineForever chapter 1 . 6/14/2007
It was really good. If I was the person that is owner of Tokyo Mew Mew (which I'm not) I WOULD KILL MASAYA and put Ryou Shirogane in place! Nya!
| Arilaen chapter 1 . 9/22/2006
Wow! I know everyone's said this but this story is WAY CUTE! A bit too... erm... smooth if you ask me, hardly anything besides regular characters and setting to get in the way of Ryou and Ichigo... could've been a bit longer... But it was awesome anyway! Oh, and the n is missing on the 'been' - you have 'This story has bee edited.' Just trying to help! XD
| yentles chapter 1 . 9/8/2006
I SERIOUSLY DONT KNOW HOW U DO IT
U GOTTA HELP ME THINK OF SOME STORIES!
| nameless one chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
hey that was one of the bests of RyouxIchigo I've ever read. good luck for your other fan fic. and would you tell me your other fan fic's name? thanks.
| Hostess Bunny chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
Awsome work, that was so romatic I love it!
| Most Unlikely Angel chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
i've read alot of your work like Love Behavior, Arrest and Worriying about love all of which are on my favorites now i'm proud to add this one shot to my list of favourites. You should be proud, i don't usually like oneshots because of how abrupt they are but yours was ok. Keep trying and i'm sure that your writing will improve. also i must commend you on your spelling. It is so annoying to try to read a story and the bad spelling is diatracting you, throwing you off of the story. Yours is pretty good. Keep up the excellent work.