|Reviews for Family|
| Anna Potter Black chapter 3 . 9/20/2006
what happens next? this was so good!
| fenderbender505 chapter 3 . 11/25/2005
he he- i wrote this!- i am hyperactive! which explains why i am so hyper right now! of course i love this story because i helped write it. i have a story i wrote by myself too, so you all should check it out if you get bored! melo-dramatic hasnt updated in a while cause shes in a play right now, but o well. anyway I HOPE SHE UPDATES SOON SO I CAN WRITE MY CHAPTER! lol, not like im in any hurry or anything!
| Dylan chapter 3 . 11/7/2005
Great Chapter Allie But who or what made the disturbance quikly write more i want no need to know. L8r
| smalltowngurl chapter 3 . 11/6/2005
you guys are funny, i love this story and hate cliff-hangers but owell
| Dylan chapter 1 . 11/2/2005
let me guess
Allia iS Allie
yeah 10 points for me
| Pai chapter 2 . 10/30/2005
Hey, 'Chapter 2'is only a repeat chapter of Chapter 1/
| johnsocz chapter 2 . 10/29/2005
I really like your story so far but has anyone told you that the first and second chapters are exactly the same.
I am enjoying the plot and really really like the story line so far. Nice job.
| smalltowngurl chapter 2 . 10/29/2005
wait, aren't these the same chapters?
| Dragon Sword Master chapter 1 . 10/23/2005
Good story so far.
I always like reading Harry/OC stories.
Keep up the good work and remember to include more romance.
| smalltowngurl chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
this is a cool way to write a story, i like how it starts, this could get interesting