|Reviews for Lucky Me|
| julamei chapter 1 . 9/6
i love everything about this. for a long time, this was the story that kept drawing me back to , so i'm so thankful that i found it and that you wrote it. you're an amazing author, rui, and this story kicks ass. thank you : )
| LeftEyeObsession chapter 108 . 9/5
OH HELL NO.
THIS WILL NOT BE THE COMPLETE ENDING.
yes I have resulted in profanity bc what the HELL?
Are you serious? You end the story with everyone in suspense. Like maybe she's alive, maybe she's not.
SHE BETTER BE THE FUCK ALIVE IN ANOTHER ONE OF YOUR STORIES, IM NOT PLAYING.
YES THIS WILL BE HOW MY LAST REVIEW ENDS. MKAY.
Lowkey I still love you bc you are a fantastic writer, I'm just super mad at you right now.
| LeftEyeObsession chapter 107 . 9/5
UGH I HATEEEEEEE YOU. I TAKE ALL MY LOVE BACK NO FREAKING WAY YOU LET HER GET KILLED.
No I don't wanna believe it.
Nope I don't believe it.
She is alive somewhere,
Kerry just needs to relax and come home.
She has to.
Omg nooooo I actually have real tears in my eyes. I fell in love with Kerry (not like that) she became a favorite character and you killed her.
You are freaking evil.
| LeftEyeObsession chapter 98 . 9/4
Her & Bobby together makes me wanna just scream! They are soooooo freaking cute together OMFGGGGGGG!'
| LeftEyeObsession chapter 97 . 9/4
It's been Bobby this WHOLE TIME? No freaking wayyyyyyyyyyyy this explains why Chris hates him so much ugh I honeslty thought it was Adrian ugh I feel so stupid. Now I have to read over all their parts again bc I know it's Bobby now! No forreal you deserve claps for this bc I really didn't think it was him, you kept it a secret and on lock that's amazing, you are an amazing writer for this. I love you & they are the cutest couple everrrrrr OMFG.
| Lefteyeobsession chapter 75 . 9/2
Once again didnt feel like logging into a different place so i'll just do this. ANYWHO, let me tell ya'll this, Scott never really appealed to me when i first learned about the X-Men. This is someone who took awhile to grow on me. (About 8 years!) & now looking at this i love Scott so much (still don't like his wife) bc of his leadership/fatherly qualities. This man for fact looks out for his family and that is admirable. Although he is kinda stiff, he is also well respected & i respect him through and through.
LOVE ME SOME SCOTTY :p lol
| LeftEyeObsession chapter 34 . 8/28
Where is my love interest to put chocolate on my bed bc I asked for it? That is so cute like omg, GOALS.
| Lefteyeobsession chapter 31 . 8/28
Sorry not by my ipad bc it won't charge -_- but i needed to review this chapter! Okay the bump and grind part had me in tears LMAO like i was really crying bc it was so funny to me. When she said Adrian could dance i was like GET YOURS HUNTY, but she couldnt here me so. But i wish her and Adrian would just get together already like... okay thats it i think. Adrian is literally the cutest thing ever idcidcidc *heart emoji*
| LeftEyeObsession chapter 30 . 8/28
YASSSSSSS Adrian keep it a hunnit with shorty LOL I crack myself up.
No you naive child, friends that are boys don't typically look at you with just your underwear on and say that you look pretty good.
She needs Jesus and to grow up a little tbh.
| LeftEyeObsession chapter 29 . 8/28
Okay seriously, it's sooooo annoying not knowing who this He kid is! But I think it's Adrian so I'm gonna assume it's Adrian. Anyways I think they would be cute if they got together like seriously awwwwwwww (: but what happened it Sam? Haven't heard from him in awhile /:
| SKYSPRITE chapter 31 . 8/8
Finally. It is now known that Adrian was HE on two occasions.
| SKYSPRITE chapter 29 . 8/8
HE is in almost every chapter now.
This is starting to really annoy me. I'm having a hard time enjoying reading because I don't even know who I'm reading about!
I've figured out that HE is a love interest of your OC, but besides that I know nothing about him. Not even his name! Is this character just THAT unthought out?
On a side note, how old is Kerry? When I'm reading about her I see her as being 12-14.
| SKYSPRITE chapter 27 . 8/7
Again with the mystery characters. I don't know who it is with just "He".
| SKYSPRITE chapter 25 . 8/7
She complains a lot but she always ends up doing what others want her to.
This is a good story so far, but I have some issues with it.
1) You skip scenes too much. Usually it's something that didn't need to be skiped. Sometimes it's something important but isn't shown because you decided to skip it.
2) probably the most annoying. When Kerry is talking to a mystery someone. It's a Mystery because you never mention them by name. I don't know about you but I can't tell who a character is without some sort of clue. I'm not a mind reader.
3) Kerry is very incoherent. It seems its just her personality, which is fine. My problem is that she has the role of narrator/main character. Sometimes I get confused because she doesn't explain something very well. It would probably help if there was another perspective from a different character. Preferably one who is coherent.
Now, onto the things I like.
I like Kerry. She's a good OC. I've found things we have in common so I can put myself in her shoes. At one point I was close to tears because I was so into the story and what she was going through.
You keep the other characters in character pretty well. Their not mindless drones who always have the same personalities and reactions (namely towards your OC).
Good humor. Sometimes it's at inappropriate moments, but regardless this story has made me laugh. The bathroom scene was my favorite.
I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this fanfic.
| Guest chapter 45 . 4/2
This story was amazing I read it start to finish and I never once wanted to stop reading.
The chatecter growth in kerry/ kookie was done extreamly well and she was a extreamly realistic charecter she had her flaws and she had her could picture this girl being real and relate to her.
Whil reading this I was laughing at Kerrys sarcasim tearing up at the horrable situations she went through and getting angry with her when someone screwed her over.
The only problems I found with this was a few times the spelling and grammer was wrong also the whole secret relationship were for basicly the whole story whomever Kerry was dateing was just called he. This made me extreamly confused at the end of the story when we figer out who he is and the persom has changed and I didn't know when.