Reviews for Driving
Mt.Suz chapter 1 . 10/23/2005
OK. I finally had a chance to read your story. I liked the back and forth interaction in the car. Very true to life. I can see Don and Charlie talking like this. Thought it was funny Alan saw the dent right away. Parents are like that. Thank you for posting this.
themidnightstar chapter 1 . 10/23/2005
Ha! Very cute. Loved the ending.
bree1387 chapter 1 . 10/23/2005
I liked the ending a lot. This sounds like a conversation Don and Charlie would have. You captured Charlie and his need to be perfect at everything, and how it relates to his driving really well. And I loved Don's little protective streak at the end.
DarkSideCookie chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
I liked the story. I think you captured the characters well and the sibling rivalry between the brothers, but I don't think a driver over the age of 18 has to have a permit to drive. I think that's only in you're a minor when you get your liscense. When over 18 you can just go take the test or 21. I can't remember. Other than that, good story. BYES!
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