|Reviews for Runaway|
| Fletty chapter 3 . 9/13/2012
Good story, though I really think it's the parents responsibility to talk with John about how much they love him - it's not Scott's responsibility. He's only 15! (P.S. 15 and driving? Really? lol).
It would have been good to see the family do something together to try and involve John more - not just have Scott taking an interest.
His mum didn't even apologise for missing his show! So I'm really not thinking highly of her.
I was half expecting a scene with Virgil too, since he knew John well enough to check the park.
But it's a great story, you had some really nice moments of Scott and John.
| moonbeam1987 chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
aww poor john i hope he is ok
| Chemical Girl chapter 3 . 12/5/2005
What a wonderful end to a wonderful story. Even though I don't know the songs I thought they were an excellent way of describing the feelings of everyone. Shame it had to end, hope to see more of your work.
| ladc chapter 3 . 12/2/2005
Nice story. I especially like the Scott as big brother to John aspect.
| Lillehafrue chapter 3 . 12/1/2005
What a beautiful story. It must be rough, being the quietest of five active boys. You wrote this so poignatly that it seems like I'm there watching the whole thing. Great job!
| SaucerEyes chapter 3 . 12/1/2005
What a heart moving fic. Well done. I loved the songs you chose in each chapter.
Being number six of seven children, I know all too well how easy it is for parents to be too busy or worse yet, being too exhausted to acknowledged the others exist. I ran away twice myself.
Keep up the excellent work!
| Sam1 chapter 3 . 12/1/2005
Oh! I loved this chapter. The bond that Scott and John has was wonderfully written. Great work with the Disney songs interspaced through the three chapters.
| IloveSam chapter 2 . 11/20/2005
Aw...this fic is so touching! Well written, and very sad...please update soon!
| trecebo chapter 2 . 11/8/2005
You set up the search so well. Pulling everyone in and showing the depth of caring. The time to look and think about the missing boy...
| Kathryn chapter 2 . 11/6/2005
Great keep it up going really well! What will happen to John? will he ever wake up? (too dramatic i know) but it's all good!
| Chemical Girl chapter 2 . 11/6/2005
Another brilliant chapter, I hope John is okay and thank goodness Scott has found him.
| cheryl chapter 2 . 11/6/2005
Omg i hope john is ok please update soon.
| pkw chapter 2 . 11/6/2005
i'm enjoying this tale quite a bit - tho' i'd like to know where the song in the second part came from
all in all, this is GREAT, and i can hardly wait to see how it turns out!
thanx for sharing
| the magik dragen chapter 2 . 11/6/2005
i think this is a very good story. cant wait for the next chapter. tho i think you should get a beta. your word use is mixed up, especially with hanged. most of them should be hung. and just a few other mistakes. but i hope u continue. and quickly!
| ravenlua chapter 2 . 11/6/2005
I'm really enjoying this story...Poor John.
Hope you update soon