Reviews for An Off Course Bet
ebdarcy.qt4good chapter 15 . 4/8/2016
Interesting story. Good work. I wish it went to completion of the character's storylines tho
lilyevans1998 chapter 2 . 3/24/2013
haha i really like it so far i can't stop reading it when i need to study:P you know lol
3rd Bookworm chapter 15 . 10/13/2012
A good story a bit OOC but good.
notrachels chapter 15 . 9/2/2012
They're so awkwardly adorable together, I love this :3
aweee chapter 15 . 6/28/2011
This is sooooo cute! I loved how it ends, ;D me gusta. You liked the whole story, it's so cute.
muz chapter 15 . 12/20/2010
wait? here's the part where L & J get together?
sti chapter 15 . 4/7/2010
Aw. That was so cute. I love James POV)
MULAN-IFUWEREGAY chapter 15 . 7/3/2008
update soon
R E Z I A chapter 15 . 6/30/2008
Sorry..but at first,i was confused about the ending,because i didnt know that they ,also...i liked it!it was sweet!but i do wish you added more detail to it..especially their kisses! w
R E Z I A chapter 14 . 6/30/2008
WHAT THE HELL?James' poem made even me embarassed for him!I feel so bad for him! T_T Poor James! T_T
R E Z I A chapter 7 . 6/29/2008
Argh!Spelling errors!Bugs the poo outta me. ;] When will he get the courage to ask Lily!I like a 're so cute!
p chapter 8 . 4/25/2008
candy makes the world go round, like the story.
Can't fight the moonlight chapter 15 . 4/2/2008
I loved it! :D

Well, to be honest, I really REALLY LOVED it! ;D

It's one of the best fics I've ever read, it was so cute and funny and... I can go on with this list forever so I better stop there xD

I really like the way you wrote this one, hearing James's thoughts and all, it seemed so real, it really sounded like him... well, I don't know what he's like, but that's how I imagine him x)

Anyways, back to my review.. it was so funny to read his thoughts, I don't know how many times I laughed and grinned like an idiot xD

This fic was in other words adorable! ;)
Princess Gillybean chapter 15 . 3/22/2008
aw James was just the right mix of arrogance and awkardness. it was an awesome story.
Jaliy chapter 15 . 1/25/2008
Great story! Really liked your Lily and James.

Quite hilarious, good job!
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