Reviews for Unforgiven
Heart's Door chapter 1 . 10/24/2005
Hm . . . . I'm not sure I understand the whole thing . . . Wasn't Tohru dying? How is she still alive? What happened to Kyo? Ack! My brain hurts!

Anyway, that was so touching! The story was well-written, and it had an aura of mystery, which makes people think. Overall, if I were to rate this story on a scale of 1-10 (1bad; 10good) then I would rate this story an 11. _

By the way, you're not supposed to write song-fics, I believe. It's in the rules, right?
Klove0511 chapter 1 . 10/24/2005
Ok, what on earth happened? Did Kyo die? Because at first I definitely thought Tohru was the one dying...and wasn't, and I got really confused. The story is mesmerizing though. I liked it despite my utter confusion. It draws you in and doesn't release its hold until the end. There were a few minor grammatical errors, also..just in case you care about that sort of thing. good story!