|Reviews for A Youthful Attraction|
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/25/2014
Cit story I liked it
| FluidDegree chapter 4 . 12/21/2006
This seems like a good story, I wonder if your going to continue
| Silverfox-925 chapter 4 . 8/16/2006
Please you must write more, I have never been more excited to wait for an update. Plus this story is keeping me on my toes, I hope you keep up the job well done. Also this story sounds fantastic, so PLEASE UPDATE ASAP.
| Suzy87 chapter 4 . 6/15/2006
Good! Too Bad you didn't finish!But is almost if you have! This last chapter is very good!
| K-Marie-M chapter 4 . 5/1/2005
well the page placement is kind a weird but other than that i think this story has real good stuff. You could even end it here, which you probably did but you could continue if you needed to. I liked it because of the first chapter, that was really good. Not that i didnt like the other chapters, but 1 is my fav.
| Audacia chapter 4 . 3/16/2005
I love it! I want more...Are you going to be updating soon?
| RiddicksFoxyLady chapter 3 . 1/31/2005
This is really good so far and was wondering when you would be updating. Hope to see a new chapter soon!
| xXxswiggsterxXx chapter 4 . 1/16/2005
| clove.cigarettes chapter 4 . 12/25/2004
I LOVE IT!
I LOVE IT SO MUCH!
PLZ WRITE MORE!
P.S riddick is really really really hott
and him and jack should be toghther to the end!
| beyond-the-grave-sango's-lover chapter 4 . 10/16/2004
this is great please finish this story i can't wait to read it when it is done
| Sorceress Jade chapter 4 . 10/10/2004
Gebus, the puppy thing was a really sob story. It worked, but it was so fucking sad.
Anyway, I find it plausible (before the COR came out of course) that he'd come back for her. I can't help but wonder where Imam went and hope you might like to explain and use that to some extent. Anyway, glad they found each other, hope she doesn't get her nose cut off.
| Sorceress Jade chapter 3 . 10/10/2004
Cackles... Good to know UPS has survived into the new millenia.
| Sorceress Jade chapter 1 . 10/10/2004
OK, There's like one or two lines that need work. I almost closed the fic down without reading the good part cause it turned me off so strongly. The few lines of Jack saying 'nothing' and his thanking her etc. The wording is not in character at all.
I DID however, like the the kiss scened it was, well it's a bit sick really, but it's a very innocent and intimate scene that gives some relative insite. I think that portion was done very well, it's just that middle dialoge that needs help. Yes, glad I went back and read that paragraph :D
| Underwater Owl chapter 4 . 8/13/2004
OH MY GOD.
way to not finish the story. you actually made the whole riddick jack thing work, even though it is a little creepy, but still!
WOW. Bloody wow.
| Riddicksapprentice chapter 4 . 8/6/2004
I really liked it. can't wait to read chpt. 5.