|Reviews for The Master Jeweler|
| Hatake Sienna chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
Wow this was really good Beth... to use Jewelry to describe the beauty in the world. Very nice.
| Yanielle chapter 1 . 12/30/2006
wow...I like it! its great to see something about God on fanfiction.
| Shade chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
If I were to say
That I loved this story as well,
That poetry is the way
To being able to tell
Others what you think on display,
Would you think it a motive to excel?
Write what you need to be able to portray
Your thoughts, and on that note, farewell,
And I implore you to write more everyday.
| whatchamacallme chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
AMEN! This is an awesome anology! Beautiful! I love it.
| Bamfwriter chapter 1 . 11/14/2005
Sorry, it's nothing special.
| almostinsane chapter 1 . 10/26/2005
| maranatha517 chapter 1 . 10/25/2005
Nice poem. i like the imagery...never thought of God as the Master Jeweler.
You have Summer, Fall, and Winter...where is Spring? Three is good...Four is better.
Above all, good work. May God be glorified by this poem.
"Therefore if anyone is in Christ, he is a new creation. The old has passed away; behold, the new has come." 2 Corinthians 5:17
3 4 7!
| Yawgmoth's Messenger chapter 1 . 10/25/2005
wow... that was a good poem! did it really get put up in a newsletter?
meh, you might not remember me, but im still around! saw this on an author alert email and decided to check it out... well, it was good reflection on how God loves.
and it makes you feel warm inside... well, it does! dont look at me like that!
(walks off, waiting to return... well, until next time we meet...)
| pen chapter 1 . 10/24/2005
wonderful poem! You have good talent and keep it up.