|Reviews for Destined for Me|
| miko-demoness chapter 42 . 3/13
Loved it :)
| Hey chapter 42 . 1/21
First of all: I loved your ideas for the story, even though Kagome constantly being sick and Sesshomaru being her equal, in physical power was kind of 'too much of a good thing'...
Second of all, sadly I only pulled through to chapter 28. I really tried and I wanted to know how everything ended etc. But sometimes less is more and your writing/ story gets so repetitive, that it was really frustrating. You also tend to go too much into detail. If you shortened your story to 20 chapters with a minimum of 15 pages for each, this would be just THE most amazing thing ever.
You know, sometimes it's better not to repeat old storylines, already used in the plot, and to actually just jump to the next thing. I mean Kagome can only faint so many times, before it gets annoying.
And finally, last but not least, you abused every fricking cliché there was. And worst of all, you didn't decide which way to go with them, beforehand. I mean do you want Sesshomaru to be dominant and protective or do you want her to be weakish and submissive? Also, their clothing. It feels, to me like you typed out every stereotype you could find (Being afraid of mother in law, wearing an armani suit, the librarian).
I'm sorry, if this Review is really douchebaggy, but fact is I would have loved to read this, but I had to admit defeat :/
I'm trying again later, because it's also kind of really entertaining and interesting.
| Dark Kitten Saki chapter 7 . 1/20
I really like the plot so far and your ideas are unique. The only piece of advice I have is you have use the word "ordeal" too many times. When a reader notices a word like that, it tends to disrupt the world you are trying to create for them.
| militarychick22 chapter 42 . 12/6/2013
i love this story best one of sesskags pairibg
| satuross chapter 42 . 10/19/2013
W00t thanks for the story!
| satuross chapter 19 . 10/19/2013
i love your stories... and you have more in your profile. oh god T_T what fun!
| satuross chapter 5 . 10/19/2013
going to start reading this. sounds interesting.
I hate how i cant copy this into word and read this on my phone... i hate T_T
| KieraTdg chapter 7 . 9/29/2013
| KieraTDG chapter 2 . 9/29/2013
This is only the second chaptef but I can already tell this going to best one of the best stories I've ever read and one of my favorite:-D
(Super big smile!)
| Aya's Angel chapter 42 . 9/28/2013
Oh my god! That was AMAZING! That's the best read I've had in a long time. You did a wonderful job.
| briarleaves chapter 42 . 9/2/2013
Waaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh its over!
good now that that is out of my system i loved your story it was perfect it even rivals kanna37s the flower girl your one good author and i hope u continue to do what u do. :-)
| ashely.tremblay chapter 42 . 9/1/2013
Loved your story. You are truely brilliant :)
| briarleaves chapter 7 . 8/28/2013
What the fluff!that you WHAT the hey hey i mean THAT was well intense
formerly known as yuki
| Guest chapter 42 . 8/9/2013
| EllaJuroku chapter 21 . 8/6/2013
For the two demons 2 words: