Reviews for Voices in the Wind
machievelli chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
Posted 10 December 2010 on StarwarsKnights under The Critic returns and Lucasforums under the Critic s Two Cents.

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Pre Mandalorian Wars: Follow on to Mobius, the one left behind decides she is going to follow

The piece brings two scenes together; the man who had gone on speaking at his father's grave, and the same scene with the woman that loves him doing the same at her grandfather's grave. Both have pretty much the same plaints, and their reasons are different, but you can see them leaving together rather than separately.

Pick of the Week
Micahx20 chapter 1 . 10/25/2005
I loved your story, its got some intresting points. Your style is a little eratic try being less blunt and color your words abit. Other wise your ideas and your story line is very entertianing. lol i'm putting you on my alerts list keep up with the good work... wow i cant wait. I'd love a review from you. be sure to keep me posted on all your new work