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The Tip of My Tongue chapter 3 . 5/21/2011
Perdon, I was going through your stories and failed to notice how long it has been since an update. Even so, that does degrade the story. I still like it! :)

Right now my Spanish is terrible, but I hope one day I'll be able to read Medeah's (as well as other's) works.

Anyways, I enjoyed this very much!

Thank you for posting, Jerico!
The Tip of My Tongue chapter 2 . 5/21/2011
Nice! This is more like a horror story than anything else(at least in my opinion). I probably shouldn't be reading this right before bed, but... it's written so well I couldn't pass it up.

Hazlov2004 chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
this will be good
SaradocCraver101 chapter 3 . 2/27/2006
I love it. _
Medeah chapter 3 . 12/11/2005
I'm so happy to see another chapter, as always, thank you for your great work, it's really moving to see your story in another language...

just a few coments, that a should add in the original version, but I didn't, he, he...: the Leng's sphere comes from the Cristal of Leng, an ancient and evil object very common in Lovecraft stories, but I took just the name... and Muffy Simmons, at first, was some kind of homage to Buffy Simmons, the vampire Slayer, like an opposite... you'll see... but later, the character runs with her own personality...

That's it, thank you for reading this story and leave a review y gracias a jerico por todo (a ver si nos ganamos la categoria ¿eh?, jejeje)
Tewi chapter 3 . 12/9/2005
wow, this story is so weird! but it's definately a good weird! i luv it, keep goin'!
lost-katana chapter 3 . 12/9/2005
Hey, good job! This chapter was excellent... and long! I love long!

(shivers) Why do I get the feeling that Leo isn't... well... Leo. Did he get switched or something? And I think he stole that artifact. Not good.

Hehe I like Muffy! She's cool! And funny!

Strangest scene, huh? (smiles) I wonder who could've nominated you?

Please update soon!
lost-katana chapter 2 . 11/6/2005

(shivering) (cowering in fear) THIS is scary! Is Stephen King aware of the threat you pose to his career?

Okay, I know this was all a nightmare, but was the last part real? If not, I think I have an idea where you're going with this...

Good job, please update soon!
Lady Katana4544 chapter 2 . 11/5/2005
Wow, very interesting. keep up the good work.
Medeah chapter 2 . 11/1/2005
of course I'm reading this... jejeje...

I've never read Hyperion, but I've heard about it... if you ask me, the whole idea of this chapter was inspired for a movie: Hellraiser IV, where a man was trapped in a neverending nightmare... very creepy...

¡hey! que tal, decidí responderte aqui, y en ingles para no desentonar, jeje...

si, tal vez tengas razon con lo de la violencia...

me encanta tu trabajo, continúa por favor... -

you think I'm creepy?... yeah, many people call me that... but they don't read my stories, hum, hum...

jejeje... me alegra que te esté gustando la historia y

saludos desde por acá, ya nos estamos leyendo en el proximo cap.
Tewi chapter 2 . 10/31/2005
whoa...crepy! can't wait for more though, it's really good! (little confusing at the end but still loved it)!
lost-katana chapter 1 . 10/29/2005
Wow! You got my attention!

This looks to be promising! But I must point out two things. One: Did you mean to put THE eyes? I was confused by that. And secondly, when you do dialogue, you should put theperson who's speaking's actions after THEIR words, not the other person. That's also confusing.

Anyway, I'm loving this so far and am looking for an update soon!
Tewi chapter 1 . 10/25/2005


nice-can't wait for more!