Aww! Really nice, but sad. A great sad fanfic!

Heheheh. The more buckles thing cracked me up so much. Very nice and touching. I love these two.

Interesting. I liked it. You really should write more humorous things for these brothers. I'm not usually one for angst fics, so... But I may eventually read the rest of your YGO fics. XD

Ja,

TSV

Aw that's really adorable, I have tears in my eyes. As for the storyline, makes sense to me.

Jeez at the beginning I was kinda confused on what's going on. It's always best to have something happening instead of monologuing what's happening. Then by the middle I could see how complex this was, and I love that. They're so many layers to this story it's amazing.

I must say I love the idea that little Mokuba designed his brother's wardrobe (including the bondage belts as they are called haha).

Aww, how cute. I like how Mokuba's holding things together, trusting that Seto will wake up and take back the reins.

Ha! I love the idea that Mokuba designed the trenchcoats for Seto. Also, the idea of Mokuba making a chessboard for his birthday, and then not giving him the presents even though they were there. As usual, you did a great job!

aww, very cute

So that's where Seto-sama's outfit came from? That's beautiful! *sobs* This would make a wonderful doujinshi!

Sweet, this does work as a humour/angst, though I think it's a bit heavier on the angst. The part with Mokuba's chess set... I was just made so sad by that!

Very well written, very poinient. I love your Seto angst.

Did Mokuba really design Seto's trenchcoat? If not, wicked idea. If so, wow. Still and all, a nice touch and a great story. It's now in my favorites.

I like the symbolic burning of the suits you've got going on there (I hate those suits as well, they just don't fit his character).. Like Mokuba's burning the remains of Death-T, which is fitting because him and Kaiba tend to look to the future. I also like how you have Mokuba design Kaiba's Trenchies of Doom

Cool, i liked it.

I knew it!...ok i didn' Mokuba can't get used to his brother like that,but its will come out of it soon and look sexy in his will be happy and Seto will be chased like a dog by fangirls *coughmecough*.

Whoa. Okay, definitely waffy and nicely sentimental... but was I the only one who got a set of chills from this? Such good foreshadowing; and the symbolism of burning the old clothing to make room for the new was just a little phoenix-like. Liked that; good fic.

Aw...that's so...sad...and sweet...good job