Reviews for Laying Down the Law
Kitala chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
I love it! Never been drunk, but the perspective SOUNDS good.
volleyballlover chapter 1 . 10/26/2005
This is...good. I liked the first part where you quoted the novel, but remember that quotes are always in "" quotation marks. Besides that, I thought it was good. I like stories with Cherry and Bob and I think yours is one of the best ones I've seen. Nice job!

~*~Volleybalover~*~ :)
Hahukum Konn chapter 1 . 10/26/2005
I like this. I reads well, and I think you've captured the drunkenness bit properly. :)
Lear's Fool chapter 1 . 10/26/2005
Good one-shot. I've always been kind of dissapointed that there are hardly any fics about Bob, and just about zero of Randy(who happens to be my favorite character in the Outsiders). There was one paragraph in there that I especially liked.

He laughs some more. It’s all funny. He’s waiting for the storm—the yelling, the fighting. He wants to know if he can take it. He doesn’t know, he’s never tried. He’s not sure what he’s supposed to do, but the booze helps him to just stand there, one hand on the wall for support.

Very good picture painted there, and very much the way I can see Bob's thoughts going.
Aseret Kitsune chapter 1 . 10/25/2005
this is really good. i love the emotions.