Reviews for Shadow Sister
TheCandyChild chapter 2 . 8/30/2015
...Ed was incredibly OOC in that part
TheCandyChild chapter 1 . 8/30/2015
Aww xD Ed's so cute.
M4ge-Of-Light chapter 4 . 2/4/2014
There isn't 13 inches in a foot only 12 so she is really 5 feet tall
WriterFreak001 chapter 19 . 9/1/2012
What did Ed end up giving Winry for Christmas? O.o
WriterFreak001 chapter 12 . 9/1/2012
uhhhh...I thought Kumori was a baby when she died... You make it sound like she died a child or something...
theicequeen chapter 17 . 5/10/2011
omg! hora's going to kill eddddddd!
theicequeen chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
lol o this chapter is kinda funny haha
SpunkAnimeDolphin chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
sush an AWSOME STORY, TOO BAD I COULDN'T FINISH IT NOW- BUT ONCE I GET BACK "SO CALLED STUPID SHOPPING" I'LL GET TOO IT! hehe LOL _
Muffled Chimes chapter 19 . 7/22/2006
I LOVE YOU! *worship* i love this story so much and so does my mom! (i read it to her and she loves it to pieces) i can't wait to read the sequel! this is my favorite fullmetal alchemist story and just so you know i have a printed copy of it that i carry with me at all times. :D i love it! GREAT work! *goes to read next one*
darn-you-Mary-sue chapter 19 . 7/18/2006
Sort of funny, start before halloween, end near summer. I like in a sense.
darn-you-Mary-sue chapter 12 . 7/18/2006
NO! don't do it don't make another hom- what ever there called! okay theres a story every one should read called "revenge of the cast", There are 7 hom- uh um I don't know how to spell it... But 7 for a reason none the less. They are the 7 deadly sins "Time" isn't a sin correct me if I'm wrong. Cause you were all ready pushing it making the story revolve around a fan charater.

But hey I like it any way!

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rainismysunshine chapter 19 . 7/18/2006
*sobs* WHY MUST IT END? i must say those last two chappies rocked! lol...

i was quite amuse by the word whorebitch...did u come up with that? lol

anyways! AWESOME STORY! LOVED IT! ROCK ON! CANT WAIT FOR DA SEQUEL!

~Rayne
Cassiemayaa chapter 19 . 7/12/2006
that was a really good story i have never read something with that kind of plot so it was unique.
Lychee Green Tea chapter 1 . 7/10/2006
ROFL! nice first chappie. i know u still have A LOT of chappies for me to read but ill review anyways! besides, you get more reviews this way D. this was really good, but ed seemed way too OC in this. especially when he was about to pull winry into a kiss. oh well, i still like it. ive always been a sucker for fluffs anyways lol. ill keep reading. i cant wait to finish this though. if i like a fic enough ill finish it in like a day no matter how long it is and i got a feeling this is gonna be one of those fics lol.
FMAFreak129 chapter 19 . 7/6/2006
can't wait for the second one
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