|Reviews for Falling|
| Moonprincess202 chapter 1 . 3/17/2006
This is really good. I'm glad Rui is given a new chance at life.
| Yuki of the Snow chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
_* Heh, I liked this one a lot. There is only one thing that I am able to correct in it, and it really isn't a correction at all. This is beautifully written, but you use the word "alien" too much. Here are some synonyms if you would like them: conflicting, contrary, estranged, exotic, extraneous, extrinsic, inappropriate, incompatible, incongruous, opposed, remote, separate, unusual
Sorry if I offended you at all by correcting you, because I know some people who would rip my head off if I said that I didn't like something they did. I so want to see a continuation of this...though you might have already continued it...I need to keep up with what's going on here more...sorry for not keeping up with all of your stories. I just have other things to do, and other websites that I go on. It just takes me forever to get around to things sometimes. -_-*
| megz chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
good. keep going!