Reviews for Slides
WontYouLightMyCandle chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
aww I'm going to cry

This is beutiful, wonderfully written.

*sniff* going to get a tissue now :)
Missmaggiemay21 chapter 1 . 6/14/2007
Um...that was the worst thing i've ever read in my entire life!

Just kidding! You know who I am, and if you don't that makes me sad. I liked it, you captured Mark's emotions so well. It was very well written.
xoxo yourstruly chapter 1 . 6/14/2006
amazing. I have to say and though I didn't capitalize the "a", hopefully, it still holds the same impact. I almost cried at the end... hee hee... keep up the good work.
Sparrow's Someone chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
beautiful. you made me cry. poor marky... you're a wonderful author!
Racetrack1899 chapter 1 . 11/25/2005
Very very impressed with how this was written. Encaptured the characters well.

great story
IDontOwnEmotion chapter 1 . 10/29/2005
aw. thats so sad. i love mark angst stories. good job
Jimbo chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
This story is quite good, but is almost completely dependent on knowledge of RENT, the Broadway musical. The narrow focus limits the potential audience.

The author excels at getting into the mind of the speaker, easily portraying appropriate feelings to the photographs.

Overall, this short story is a powerful and moving piece.
Gallifreyan Ginger chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
And I weep...that was tragically beautiful. '-(
starsinthesky LJ chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
Not bad, but just so you know...the Life Cafe doesn't have a stage or anything of the sort, and Collins taught Computer Age Philosophy. (But his students would rather watch TV...;))
Elphie Marky chapter 1 . 10/27/2005
That was so sad. I'm seriously crying. But it was really good. Poor Marky all alone. Great story.